Playing Lukas Sorensen By: Justin Cumberland

[PitLoverVA (imported)]

I'm definitely loving the series. I eagerly await each new installment and am very interested to see where things go next. Justin Cumberland is doing an excellent job with the characters and the plot.

[StefanIsMe (imported)]

This story is reminding me, in a wierd way, of a movie made by a Canadian, David Cronenburg(berg?). It has somehow picked up on the deeply scary, undertone-of-evil feel of Dead Ringers, a movie that creeped me right the fuck out back when it came out.

Not that there have been any "gynecological tools for mutant women" in this story, though... :p

Anyway, I continue to enjoy, and live in fear for poor Lucas as the evening continues (I'm posting this just after having read chapter 59).

[artisticlicense (imported)]

This one is a little different, but in a good way.

I too felt awful for poor Lucas, and was starting to really dislike Matthew, until he got a little sumpin' at the Police Station. (Would like to see Mr. Sorensen take a role in 'fatherly attention' to Matthew & take the bad Cop down a few ounces in his mysterious dungeon/museum!)

There's got to be a reason for having all that stuff, right?

Hope this one ends with Matthew realizing what a great little guy Lukas is, and how much he can't live without him.

Keep them coming Justin. Can't wait for the next installment.

[StefanIsMe (imported)]

WOOOO boy... things gettin' wierd now!

Just read chapter 75 and what a left-turn in the storyline... wow. This is great stuff, with one hell of an intricate plot, which we seem to only be beginning to see the depths of.

Thank you, Mr. Cumberland!

[george2u2 (imported)]

Thanks for the story. I thought I posted comments the other day but I don't see them in the thread.

Living in the Mountain West more specifically that "Po dunk town by the Salty swamp" I just love the Australian references to the car park.

I don't know your age, but I'm on the verge of geezerhood, and I have children.

from that perspective I know of my great love for my offspring, I make a conscious effort to know what my kids are doing, where they are doing it, who they are seeing, and try to support them and offer encouragement in there endeavors. However the reality of life is that I travel in my employment. I don't think that any parent really knows everything a child is going through. And your children do try to hide the things from you that they think you might disapprove of.

Of the three fathers, I think that Mr. Sorenson could be the most helpful to the boys. Not just because of his wealth, but in his empathy, not just for his son's gayness, but for Mathews homophobia.

Maybe I'm just showing the PFLAG mom side of a gay father.

[MyLeftNut (imported)]

To be totally frank: I barely have any idea what's even going on in this story (I've been reading it rather lazily), and it's not entirely my "thing" as far as erotica goes—but I have to say, every time I read the latest installment, it becomes clearer that this is one of the best-written stories that has appeared on this site, ever. There's a lot more going on here than just a jerkoff fantasy. Congratulations are in order.

[PiperBuffy (imported)]

I have to say this is one of the best online stories I have read in a very long time. I wasn't sure I would like it, but I got pulled in and caught up in the narrative pretty quickly.

The writing is definitely above average, the characters intriguing and unique and the plot twists well thought out. This is a rare find, I believe.

I personally am more concerned with what happens with Lukas. Matthew seems to be a bit of a dumb ass, especially when he sort of figures out what is going on and gives the 'bad guys' everything.

Both my boyfriend and I have interesting ideas on how it might continue and I look forward to seeing if either of us are correct.

[Slammr (imported)]

Although I haven't had time to read all of this story, I have to agree with others about how well written it is. This author can write.

[Sanosuku (imported)]

Truthfully, I've gotten out of it now.. No offence to Justin, but i just don't like the turn the story took.

[WhispyWillow (imported)]

Unfortunately, I'm not enjoying this story anymore, either...I feel that the sequences beyond the mind control glasses were a little too dramatic and extreme.

The current scenario feels like it has completely abandoned the cat-and-mouse character interactions / fantasies in favor of what could be considered flat-out torture. Forced consent of genital mutilation out of fear of bodily destruction is simply not my thing; it's just too grim for me.

I'm sorry if I offended anybody with this post, s'just my opinion.