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Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 10:27 am
by Unregistered (imported)
Awesome story, can't wait for more. best on here so far.
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:12 am
by Loverboy (imported)
Unregistered (imported) wrote: Tue Feb 24, 2009 10:14 am
Without doubt, THE BEST story I have ever read on this site!!
'For the Love of Jason' is an Outstanding piece of writing!!
Hey... thanks a lot for your kind remarks. I appreciate. It helps me going...
Loverboy
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:15 am
by Loverboy (imported)
Thanks. I'm doing my best. But I must tell you that English is not my first language so sorry if, sometimes, I make mistakes.
Take care Pal.
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:25 am
by Loverboy (imported)
Thanks a lot pal for your kind remark. Don't worry; more is coming. And if you liked the first chapters, my guess is that you will like the rest of the story. The only part I haven't written yet is the conclusion. So as of now, I don't know how the story will end -LOL-. So stay tuned.
Loverboy
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:30 am
by Agathon7 (imported)
Science Fiction one may say, is usually historical fiction disguised in the trappings of an expected future. That such generous and tender, sentimental characters could be expected to exist in a harsh and restrictive future is very optimistic and encouraging. I like it.
It's also good to see that the author, Loverboy, appreciates the appeal of the quality of true love in a relationship between an intact male and those who have been nullified or may be about to be castrated. It's the sweetness and sentimentality that moves us, and brings us to surrender to sexual contact which is only ancillary to that love. It's a love that we readers must all crave in our lives. Wouldn't one be emotionally dead not to?
I thank the author for reminding us of that feeling of humanity expressed in unselfish love.
Be thís not lóve, O lórd, why féel i só?
And bé this lóve, what kínd of thíng is hé?
If lóve be góod, what góodness sháll i sée
Withín my fáir one's héart, whence cómes my wóe.
What ís this lóve, to chánge from fríend to fóe
Sensátions ín mine héart, that tórment mé?
If hé is fálse, a wónder hé must bé,
For nóne can glímpse his mínd, his wíll to knów.
If lóve be fálse, what trúth could í discérn
From tórments ánd advérsitíes, that túrn
Mine éyes from trúth, and cáuse mine héart to shrínk
From lóving lóve himsélf, his láws to léarn?
The páins that cóme of hím are swéet i thínk,
For, ás i thírst for hím, the móre i drínk.
-a faithful admirer
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:33 pm
by Loverboy (imported)
Agathon7 (imported) wrote: Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:30 am
Science Fiction one may say, is usually historical fiction disguised in the trappings of an expected future. That such generous and tender, sentimental characters could be expected to exist in a harsh and restrictive future is very optimistic and encouraging. I like it.
It's also good to see that the author, Loverboy, appreciates the appeal of the quality of true love in a relationship between an intact male and those who have been nullified or may be about to be castrated. It's the sweetness and sentimentality that moves us, and brings us to surrender to sexual contact which is only ancillary to that love. It's a love that we readers must all crave in our lives. Wouldn't one be emotionally dead not to?
I thank the author for reminding us of that feeling of humanity expressed in unselfish love.
Be thís not lóve, O lórd, why féel i só?
And bé this lóve, what kínd of thíng is hé?
If lóve be góod, what góodness sháll i sée
Withín my fáir one's héart, whence cómes my wóe.
What ís this lóve, to chánge from fríend to fóe
Sensátions ín mine héart, that tórment mé?
If hé is fálse, a wónder hé must bé,
For nóne can glímpse his mínd, his wíll to knów.
If lóve be fálse, what trúth could í discérn
From tórments ánd advérsitíes, that túrn
Mine éyes from trúth, and cáuse mine héart to shrínk
From lóving lóve himsélf, his láws to léarn?
The páins that cóme of hím are swéet i thínk,
For, ás i thírst for hím, the móre i drínk.
-a faithful admirer
I loved your comment. Thanks pal. I really apprediated it.
Loverboy
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 4:19 pm
by Baadboi29 (imported)
hi loverboy,
i enjoy your story - intelligent, warmhearted and sensitive. Could have sum more hard slavery abuse and sex - but i hope to get more of it later.
You love boiz and you love sex - go on!
raver29@gmx.de
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:34 am
by limpdick (imported)
:):)great,sensitive love story,looking forward to more.
:dong::dong::dong: 4 if not a 5
story
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:07 am
by Unregistered (imported)
very well crafted story.I've only read parts 1 and 2 but can't wait to finish it.Never really understoon the term "bottom" but now have an accurate idea.
Re: For the Love of Jason
Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:58 pm
by Unregistered (imported)
Loverboy, keep on going, I love your story one of the best, Thanks and your English is great.