• A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

Posted: **Fri Oct 23, 2009 6:54 pm**

C van D,

Thank you for posting "Alexis tells his story" so quickly!

It was quite entertaining and definitely reached my expectations - in fact, it even went beyond them!

Some Major Thoughts:

1) Poor Alexis! If only he at least had someone - particularly someone of enough "power" - that would have vehemently objected to the barber's and the father's "punishment", or the barber hadn't come around when he did, or he hadn't been such a lowly peasant, or he wasn't ever seduced by that naughty little girl in the first place, he probably would have kept all his "parts"!

2) Those devilish little "urchins"! They seemed to have absolutely no respect for anyone, whether it was poor suffering Alexis, the annoyed busy barber, or even/especially themselves!

3) A Terrific Moral of this particular story: "Good little boys should never play with naughty little girls!"

Anyway, thank you again for posting this very entertaining story so quickly!

---JustPlainCurious

Posted: **Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:20 am**

JustPlainCurious (imported) wrote: Fri Oct 23, 2009 6:54 pm C van D,

Thank you for posting "Alexis tells his story" so quickly! It was quite entertaining and definitely reached my expectations - in fact, it even went beyond them!

Some Major Thoughts:

1) Poor Alexis! If only he at least had someone - particularly someone of enough "power" - that would have vehemently objected to the barber's and the father's "punishment", or the barber hadn't come around when he did, or he hadn't been such a lowly peasant, or he wasn't ever seduced by that naughty little girl in the first place, he probably would have kept all his "parts"!

2) Those devilish little "urchins"! They seemed to have absolutely no respect for anyone, whether it was poor suffering Alexis, the annoyed busy barber, or even/especially themselves!

3) A Terrific Moral of this particular story: "Good little boys should never play with naughty little girls!"

Anyway, thank you again for posting this very entertaining story so quickly!

---JustPlainCurious

Thank you for those kind words. It gives me the opportunity to confess to various things. First, reading "Tribute" by Pueros, gave me ideas for Alexis' dancing outfit (the one that shows off his behind); secondly I've lifted a few lines from my own earlier pieces: readers may recognise some of the dialogue in "Mistaken Paternity". Third and last, the character of Alexis is a hardy perennial in my writing. For that I must blame my mother, God rest her soul. She began to tell me of the mysteries of castration when I was no more than about seven - it probably began with the family cat and the neighbour's pony, but soon led on to page boys who according to her, were always "pruned" to prevent them ever doing "rude things with girls". This has been a recurrent theme in my stuff: in fact it's the substance of "Roddy's Vacation Job" start to finish.

Posted: **Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:53 pm**

C van D, thanks for writing up this new story! I somehow missed it, and just read. Quite a fun little romp. Great work!

Here's where to find it, folks: http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/A/ea_91217alexis_t.htm

Now, to prod and poke you and bribe you with promises of a spin-off story of my own, to write another neutersol story... I'd love to see your own version of "5 boys", or perhaps a new Simon story with some new stars for us to meet? I've been toying with something that would involve your crew of lads periferally, as I've always wanted to explore the Neutersol drug aspect.

Thanks, anyway, for what you have done for us readers here at the archive. I just took a peek at the storys-list by author, and realized you have darn near a full screens' worth of tales. Talk about output!

Thanks, Mr. Dongen

A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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