Nat's Lonesome Cowboy

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Paolo
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Nat's Lonesome Cowboy

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If you have some time, take it to read the 2 stories by Nat. I have worked with them a bit, mainly because I really liked them once I'd read them a couple of times.

Keep in mind, you are reading what Nat wrote, then ran through a translator. Then I read it, and edited what the translator did. So, the old theory of "he said that he said that he said to him..." might apply. Apologies to Nat for this, and for the time dealy. I've been sick, you know. Darvocet isn't all it's cracked up to be.

Still, if you like symbolism and just plain psychedelia and imagery, read these. Not to spoil it, but one wonders what a 'mole' really is and why a 'mole' can see the eunuch who guards the Doors of Time.

Of course, Nat, you know you have to finish this thing now.

Lonesome Cowboy / Prequel (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/L/ea_230016the_lone.htm)

Cowboy/Remix (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/D/ea_230028did_you_.htm)

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Re: Nat's Lonesome Cowboy

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Yes Paolo, they make some of the most well-crafted and imaginative writing I have seen here (or at least the first one does, I haven't read the prequel yet).

I guess it is a compliment to your editing skills that it simply never occurred to me to think that this was not the words of the author in the original. Yes, it's bizzare, twisted, almost formless at times, but there is a twisted thread of logic that runs through it and provides a theme.

Well written, well translated.
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