True Lies. (Part 6) By: Josh

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Re: True Lies. (Part 6) By: Josh

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Part eight is interesting. I think Josh should ask Patrick why he had his dick and balls removed instead of just his balls. Patrick should urge Josh to have his prostate removed when his dick and balls are removed.

I think Josh should see and talk to a boy who was just nullified at this camp session. The boy should have been complete before he was nullified.

Maybe Josh should talk to a boy who wants to be nullified because his friend or older brother was nullified last year.

Maybe there should be a lottery to decide which boys are operated on first, second, etc. and last.
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Maybe Josh should ask boys with missing parts what they do about showering after P.E. and how the other boys react.
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I think Josh and Peter should talk to a group of boys who, like Peter, lost their dicks as infants. Two of them should have had their balls removed at the last camp. One should love being a nullo, the other should regret having his balls removed.
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I just read part 9. It
curious_guy (imported) wrote: Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:14 am is a good continuation of the story. I
t might be interesting if Josh had just a penectomy and was allowed to keep his testicles. Then he would be just like Peter.
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Re: True Lies. (Part 6) By: Josh

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Thank you for the new chapter, Josh! Keep it up :)
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I just read part 9. It
curious_guy (imported) wrote: Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:58 am 48624840]
is a good continuation of the story. I
t might be interesting if Josh had just a penectomy and was allowe
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d to keep his testicles. Then he would be just like Peter.

Maybe the camp could make a deal with him.

If he convinces two campers who were not originally scheduled to have castrations, to have castrations, he gets to keep his balls. If he convinces two campers who were not originally scheduled to have penectomies, to have penectomies , he gets to keep his dick.

He convinces two campers to be castrated but only one to get a penectomy. He thinks he will get to keep half his dick but they remove the whole thing.
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Re: True Lies. (Part 6) By: Josh

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curious_guy (imported) wrote: Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:26 am Maybe the camp could make a deal with him.

Maybe the camp could "cut" him a deal! ;)

Great story, Josh. I don't know how I missed your work. I just stumbled upon it a few days ago, and I love it.

I loved the close call that Josh had only to be saved by Tobias. You're doing an incredibly good job of building tension in the story.
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Re: True Lies. (Part 6) By: Josh

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Maybe Peter could convince the camp director to remove just Josh's penis so that the two boys could be the same. Maybe they could fuck each other with a strap-on dildo.
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Re: True Lies. (Part 6) By: Josh

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Have caught up on all segments of this story and have really enjoyed it. Will be looking forward to part 10.
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