Attn : JackH

[Paolo]

Your story text body didnt' paste in. Try 'er again!

[DarkkOrbit (imported)]

I believe the problem was taken care of in my second transmission. Thanks for writing.

[A-1 (imported)]

Maybe you meant "Days of WHINE and Agony"

The glass tube was a novel idea, but maybe the NEXT one she can insert in there on the next erection she willnot twist it but instead hit it with a 2 lb ball pean hammer.

I bet they would both get a bang out of that?

A-1

[Sexless (imported)]

The hammer might shatter more glass and the twist might not shatter any--anyone for an experiment?

[DarkkOrbit (imported)]

Jesus. everybody's a critic. The whole point of the story is that she's torturing him. I can't speak from hands-on experience (not exactly, anyway), but it seems to me that if you want to torture a man's genitals, you do it slowly. A ball-peen hammer would certainly do the job, and damn fast, but what would be the fun in that? That's why the protagonist (Wendy) draws out the scene...makes it last. Is there something I'm not getting here? What do you think of Day Two?