Elijah, Part 6, A San Carlos Island Story By: Josh

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Elijah, Part 6, A San Carlos Island Story By: Josh

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This was a good continuation to the story. I want to read more.

Will Jiri working as a slave for three months make him ineligible for the modeling job that was mentioned in part 4?

I hope that Josh will continue his other stories, especially "Danger Will Robinson!!!" and "True Lies"
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Re: Elijah, Part 6, A San Carlos Island Story By: Josh

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It might be interesting if Jiri misunderstood the rules and Ben could nullify one boy without the boy's consent no matter how many of the boys in the cabin volunteered.

It might also be interesting if Ben could nullify more than one boy if the boy breaks a rule or doesn't get enough clients.
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