Empirical Companion & Peace and Quiet (old stories by Paolo)

[Longtime EA Reader (imported)]

I've started reading the stories by Paolo and I'm really enjoying them a lot.

As I work my way through his stories, I really got into "Empirical Companion" but was disappointed to see it end after the 3rd chapter. There were a lot of interesting ideas and potential plot points that I'd love to see developed further. Unfortunately since the story is about 8 years old or so, I'm guessing that begging won't produce any more chapters for his fans. Sigh. So I'll say that while I wish there were lots more, thank you for those three chapters and let me say I really enjoyed them.

Another story that I really enjoyed (haven't gotten through them all yet) is "Peace and Quiet". Wow. I love how the main character was essentially controlled and mislead until it was too late. I like how it starts out and everything that happens initially with the physical is very plausible. It's strange and unusual but everything is explained in such a way that he believes all of it as it progresses step by step. I like the "seduction" aspect of it, moving him down the inevitable path, step by step, with the character not really liking what's going on but adjusting to each new "step". I also enjoyed that it was done with "love and affection" and not with anger and violence and deliberate humiliation. I got so turned on I was shaking. LOL

Thank you very much for stories. You're a very enjoyable writer. All the things I enjoy in a good story plus good writing skills, spelling, grammar, punctuation, and even actual paragraphs instead of one long continuous paragraph. LOL. Very enjoyable and very readable. I'm looking forward to sinking my teeth into the Harry Potter story. I LOVE stories with lots of chapters as well.

Again, thank you very much Paolo for your writing and for all that you do.

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