Chad's Readjustment.

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I like it where it is now, look how many posts it has created and the interest. Many really good stories dont need to have a conclusion and in fact it can spoil the whole rest of the story if it does not go the way the fantasy was building for you personaly. If I were the author, having done such a great job I would leave you all fustrated. Ironicaly the many want it to end for Chad.. When I read the end of section 3 I said to myself ...` I am not going to read any new bits and it will end the way I want it too for me`.
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I still want to read about Chad losing his dick - even if it takes several more instalments! I also love the series and don't want it to end too soon.

Still, in the meantime, I would love it if Nickolai (the author) gave us lots and lots of "jerk off" material before Chad finally gets cut. For example, in future instalments:

- Chad could be drugged and forced to suck the Doctor's dick and be fucked by the Doctor.

- He could be forced to fuck the "William's boy" (who is mentioned in the story as now having a pussy as a result of the Doctor's surgery). Also, the stepfather could be given the opportunity to try out the William's boy's new pussy to see if he wants to order one for Chad.

- Chad could fuck the nurse in the examining room while his stepfather watches in frustration through the one-way mirror in the adjacent room.

- The author could write about the Doctor looking at his "trophy collection" of cut penises (mentioned in the first instalment).

- As a means of convincing the stepfather to agree to Chad's penectomy, the stepfather could be given the opportunity to watch another teenage boy get cut - so he can see that "it's not so bad".
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First of all, thanks to Nickolai for the compliment.

I must say I'm becoming hooked on Chad's Readjustment. Most authors would have cut off Chad's cock by now, but Nickolai prolongs our anticipation of that event and injects some suspense about whether it will actually happen, putting us on the edge of our seats waiting for the next installment.

Well done, Nickolai!

part 3 (http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/C/ea_150001chad_s_a.htm)
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I'm gratified by the interest. It's fascinating to see how different aspects of the story resonate with different readers. I know I can't help but narrow the range of possibilities as I go on. Maybe I should quit while I'm ahead! I do like stories to have an ending, though, especially if I'm writing it. Three more parts are planned, for a total of 6. I will give fair warning in the header if anything irrevocable happens in that chapter.

I tend to write rather slowly, so there will be plenty of time to speculate. I'll try not to disappoint.

Thanks again for all the great comments.

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A real plot twist would be if Chad kept his dick, but the stepfather lost his!
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Nice story, would have liked more detail from Chad's POV and hope to have additional chapters now that it's complete.
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It was a great story with good build up and discription. It did not matter how it ended, the story line was irrelavent so good was the story telling. As I mentioned I was sort of hoping for a slightly less predictable end to the story away from the standard formula for this type of tale. you can never please everyone with the story so better to please yourself ! Nice one
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Even though Chad has lost his dick, I would still like the author to write more chapters! He has created a novel setting (the clone clinic) and a good cast of characters. He should keep using them!
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I want more of Chad!
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