"This Is It"- Feedback please

[dedicked (imported)]

Anyone got any feedback on the story I wrote "This Is It" or suggestions for a sequel or follow up?

[Ernie of Maine (imported)]

"This Is It" I liked your story and your style but disappointed with the ending:dong::-\__Ernie of Maine____;)

[dedicked (imported)]

oh why dissapointed?

[blondboy (imported)]

I thought that it was a well-done first story. I look forward to reading more from you. The only suggestion to make the story better that I could come up with was if the story had continued a little more and we had read about the main character's adjustment to not having a dick (Does he learn to enjoy it? What do others say? etc). Thanks for your story and best of luck on future ones.