A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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So far as it goes, this piece is a gem. Unfortunately it doesn't go far enough. We are introduced to two main characters: Queen Iona, and an exceptionally pretty 14-year-old boy who tearfully admits to having lost his testicles "unlike other boys". We are not told who castrated him, or why. After a graphic (but quite tender) description of the Queen doing "oral" on the boy, the piece ends, leaving the reader asking "What then?"

EA would do well to encourage "Femalefan" and other writers to continue, where the initial work shows promise.

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/W/ea_200859a_wounde.htm

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C van D (imported) wrote: Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:56 pm So far as it goes, this piece is a gem. Unfortunately it doesn't go far enough. We are introduced to two main characters: Queen Iona, and an exceptionally pretty 14-year-old boy who tearfully admits to having lost his testicles "unlike other boys". We are not told who castrated him, or why. After a graphic (but quite tender) description of the Queen doing "oral" on the boy, the piece ends, leaving the reader asking "What then?"

EA would do well to encourage "Femalefan" and other writers to continue, where the initial work shows promise.

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/W/ea_200859a_wounde.htm

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Since no one took me up on this suggestion, I've carried on with it myself. Part 2 has already been posted and Part 3 (and conclusion) should be ready within the week. Readers with a classical background should note that this does not attempt to be historical, or even chronologically very accurate. The author of the original, one Femalefan, introduced a vaguely classical background to the tale, and I've merely continued.

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Re: A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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VERY different to see you tackle this time-period, Mr. D. Now, I know you're not old enough to have been there (wink!), but you evoke the time in an aproachable way.

I must say, I have known you only for writing in the present time, and it's taking some getting-used-to to read you writing about a time so long ago, faaaaarrr before Lupron or Neutersol :).

Good for your for tackling something so differnt!
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Thank you for those kind remarks. The background (sort of Graeco-Roman) was suggested by Femalefan's original piece, which I considered too good to be left "up in the air". No apologies for errors of history of which I'm sure there are very many.

I became quite fond of Alexis, who is my favourite kind of boy-eunuch. Just old enough to have "done it" once with a girl, he is castrated so as to prevent him ever doing it again. At the same time his sexual curiosity and longings remain as strong as ever. Girls even find glimpses of his gelded genitals exciting!

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Re: A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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C van D,

I first want to say that you did an excellent job continuing this story! It was unfortunate though that the original author "Femalefan" has not been able/interested in continuing it in "her" own way. Maybe some day though "she" might change her mind.

Anyway, I love your take on it and especially like the relationships between Alexis and Selene and her friends. The relationships that Selene and her friends have with Alexis are pretty intriguing and actually sweet, too!

As for Alexis, his previous life in his "home village" and his "operation", would you be interested in going into more detail about them, especially the "operation", and possibly even use a "screenplay" version like you've done with other stories? Or, would you let another author write their own detailed version about them?

Well, anyway, thank you for continuing this story and doing such a nice job on it, and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your stories!

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JustPlainCurious (imported) wrote: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:47 pm C van D,

I first want to say that you did an excellent job continuing this story! It was unfortunate though that the original author "Femalefan" has not been able/interested in continuing it in "her" own way. Maybe some day though "she" might change her mind.

Anyway, I love your take on it and especially like the relationships between Alexis and Selene and her friends. The relationships that Selene and her friends have with Alexis are pretty intriguing and actually sweet, too!

As for Alexis, his previous life in his "home village" and his "operation", would you be interested in going into more detail about them, especially the "operation", and possibly even use a "screenplay" version like you've done with other stories? Or, would you let another author write their own detailed version about them?

Well, anyway, thank you for continuing this story and doing such a nice job on it, and I'll be looking forward to reading more of your stories!

---JustPlainCurious

Dear "JustPlainCurious" - I've only just read yours, but thanks for your kind remarks.

I'm trying to think of a new "Simon" story but the plot is slow in coming. Meanwhile I might well improve the shining hour with a screenplay: Selene's maids-in-waiting watching Alexis doing an erotic dance, getting tantalising glimpses of his rosebud penis and bottom; persuading him to tell the story of his castration; flashback to his village and a blow-by-blow picture of him having his balls cut out. Okay? C van D
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Re: A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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C van D,

Thank you very much for your quick and kind response! As for a new "Simon" story, that would be good. :) From what I've read about Simon Scott and his adventures, I've pictured Simon as a beautiful, strong yet sensitive, and more than just a little rebellious "boy-eunuch." :D As for that "screenplay", that would be wonderful and just what I had in mind! πŸ™

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Re: A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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JustPlainCurious (imported) wrote: Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:15 am C van D,

Thank you very much for your quick and kind response! As for a new "Simon" story, that would be good. :) From what I've read about Simon Scott and his adventures, I've pictured Simon as a beautiful, strong yet sensitive, and more than just a little rebellious "boy-eunuch." :D As for that "screenplay", that would be wonderful and just what I had in mind! πŸ™

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Well, I've started the screenplay with a sort of mise-en-scene, Alexis doing an erotic dance while the Princess and her companions look on. We'll see how it goes on from there.

I don't know if you were in on the earliest days of the Simon stories. In these, a "rebellious little boy-eunuch" was exactly what he was (aged 11 years and 7 months). I drew him from life, from recollections now decades and decades ago, of a near-neighbour's kid (his name was NOT Simon) who was a born "wrecker" - leaving a trail of chaos wherever he went, besides being, without doubt, the dirtiest-minded kid I've ever come across. Calling him to mind, all these years later, I wondered whether castration - "having his balls pricked" might not have transformed him. The rest you know.
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Re: A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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C van D,

As for the "screenplay", I'm sure it will turn out to be excellent and very entertaining! :D I can hardly wait to read it! πŸ™

As for Simon, I know he started out as a supposedly naughty, out-of-control, unattractive boy whose uncle took him to have his balls "pricked" in order to "transform" him into a more productive, well-behaved, beautiful "boy-eunch". πŸ’‘ βœ‚οΈπŸ”ͺ Even though his transformation is mostly positive, for Simon and everyone else apparently, Simon still longs to be able to really "do it" with a girl and seems to wonder more often than not whether he could have had a positive transformation that didn't require being "neutered". βœ‚οΈπŸ”ͺ :( As far as being neutered goes, his girlfriend Melanie, who is still in a committed relationship with him -I think, is more than fine with it and actually loves and prefers neutered boys. 😘 πŸ€— As for Simon's current exploits, he's some type of soldier now, isn't he? πŸ™‡ Anyway, I'm sure your future adventures for him will be great! 😎

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Re: A Wounded Boy, by "Femalefan", December 2003

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JustPlainCurious (imported) wrote: Thu Oct 15, 2009 9:21 am C van D,

As for the "screenplay", I'm sure it will turn out to be excellent and very entertaining! :D I can hardly wait to read it! πŸ™

As for Simon, I know he started out as a supposedly naughty, out-of-control, unattractive boy whose uncle took him to have his balls "pricked" in order to "transform" him into a more productive, well-behaved, beautiful "boy-eunch". πŸ’‘ βœ‚οΈπŸ”ͺ Even though his transformation is mostly positive, for Simon and everyone else apparently, Simon still longs to be able to really "do it" with a girl and seems to wonder more often than not whether he could have had a positive transformation that didn't require being "neutered". βœ‚οΈπŸ”ͺ :( As far as being neutered goes, his girlfriend Melanie, who is still in a committed relationship with him -I think, is more than fine with it and actually loves and prefers neutered boys. 😘 πŸ€— As for Simon's current exploits, he's some type of soldier now, isn't he? πŸ™‡ Anyway, I'm sure your future adventures for him will be great! 😎

---JustPlainCurious

Well, it's been posted under the title "Alexis Tells his Story". Hope it comes up to your expectations. C van D
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