Tim's Last Orgasm

[vorpalboy (imported)]

I've really been enjoying how this story is developing; it's got me eager to learn how everything will turn out. Great job!

[bella (imported)]

Another great story - well done charlieje

[Charlieje (imported)]

Thanks for the comments, folks.

But please remember, this has been a joint effort. This is Bboy's story, his inspiration. all I have done was the wordsmithing. Without Bboy it never would have happened.

[Paolo]

And you're both doing a fine job of it.

:p

[vorpalboy (imported)]

This story, each part, is just unrelentingly cool. Thanks again to both of you guys.

[Artie (imported)]

Excellent story. Can't wait for the next installment.

[vorpalboy (imported)]

Sorry to sound like a broken record here, but part 11 was fantastic, living up to all the eager anticipation. Thanks yet again to both of you.

[Artie (imported)]

He really (as far as the story goes) got it cut off. I, for one, was hoping for a last minute reprieve for Tim...but the story is still great.

[Don (imported)]

I have to join the crowd in congratulating Charlieje on this story. He's done a particularly good job in describing Tim's conflicts in getting something done that he has to have done, but knows he'll regret. And, as always with Charlieje, it's a love story, too, and not just a "cut them (or it) off and get it over with" story.

Don

[Bill (imported)]

I have really enjoyed the story. Would it be possible to get chapter 12 back? For a while yesterday, there was an extra chapter 4 that actually retrieved chapter 12. i rather suspect that someone deleted the extra without looking. Now the file for chapter 12 is missing though the index entry is there.

Bill