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[NaziNuts (imported)]

If it is OK with this site, I would like to try to do a series of Nazi based scrotum modification stories loosely based on real reasearch I am doing on those bastards. I hate them but am fascinated by them. And the thought of two working me over as in my avatar is very stimulating and inspiring for writing. But I need help. How do I get started? Can someone here look them over first to help with spelling and grammer and flow. I think my ideas and what I learned are interesting but I am shy about writing them and sending them for fear they will be laughed at. Well someone let me know how I should start or if they think the stories would not be too good here. I have read some Nazi-based stories on the archives but I think there is more to do on this subject. I don't mean to offend any who wrote those stories.

[kristoff]

Just write your stories. Make sure you do spell and grammar checks - very important. Make sure you follow good paragraphing and punctuation methods. Remember that the essential requirement for stories on our story archive is that someone must lose something "down there." Suggest you solicit beta readers in this forum to proof your stories, then submit them.

[NaziNuts (imported)]

Thank you Kristoff! I am working on the first one. I will use my word processor to spell check and it does a little grammar checking too. I'll keep the first one short. I noticed that there are many excellent writers here but that not many people post good feedback to their hard work on this bulletin board in the story feedback thread. Is it too late for me to post positive comments about some of the older stories? As a budding author too I think they also might like some positive comments, even some positive encouragement and direction like you were kind enough to start me off with. By the way in Nazi stories (and in some of their crazy human body research) they always took something off "down there" as you reminded me. Also I don't know where you found that dog quote on your post but I saw that before I joined here and recognised it to be very similar to a translated Nazi phrase I cam across. It is great. I am trying to understand their thinking and theories and some slogans can help me to find their mind set although I hope I don't start actually believing in Nazi propaganda. I don't know why I am nuts about Nazis but I am and I hope stories about them cutting off and manipulateing genitals will be OK here. Thank you again. From NNut.

[markdf (imported)]

If it is OK with this site, I would like to try to do a series of Nazi based scrotum modification stories loosely based on real reasearch I am doing on those bastards. I hate them but am fascinated by them.

A lot of people are. They're an interesting bunch. The Nazi movement is probably the most extreme of how deranged Human aggregate behaviour can become. The way that Humans -- individually reasonable and rational -- are collectively gullible, stupid, and mindlessly belligerent.

The Nazis are also interesting for how consistently they squandered their initial advantages during the war, and threw away any hope of winning. Few wars have ever been so poorly fought by one side. Truly a lesson in the dangers of cronyism and selective ignorance.

[A-1 (imported)]

A lot of people are. They're an interesting bunch. The Nazi movement is probably the most extreme of how deranged Human aggregate behaviour can become. The way that Humans -- individually reasonable and rational -- are collectively gullible, stupid, and mindlessly belligerent.

The Nazis are also interesting for how consistently they squandered their initial advantages during the war, and threw away any hope of winning. Few wars have ever been so poorly fought by one side. Truly a lesson in the dangers of cronyism and selective ignorance.

It's a double edged sword.

They had to be CRAZY to do what they did and get into power and once they were in power they lost the war because they were crazy.

Hitler was a MADMAN. He acted like he had syphillis and it went to his head. Probably got it from a hooker in Vienna... maybe his mother...

[NaziNuts (imported)]

In just a few words, both markdf and A-1 encapsulated the Nazi theme better than anyone I've met in years of study groups. There's a lot of intelligence and wit on this site, and here's hoping some will rub off on this new member and new writer. Thanks!

From NaziNuts, not a Nazi but fascinated by the theme.

P.S. Thanks to those who have made this new member welcome here with positive comments when they sent reputation points. But, although all came with comments that are positive, two were sent with red buttons instead of green, so maybe my themes are a little too negative for some. Negative themes are not my intentions though (still learning to express myself better), and does anyone have any constructive criticism for my first-posted story (Ass Chamber - Part I)?

[Gil (imported)]

It's a double edged sword.

They had to be CRAZY to do what they did and get into power and once they were in power they lost the war because they were crazy.

Hitler was a MADMAN. He acted like he had syphillis and it went to his head. Probably got it from a hooker in Vienna... maybe his mother...

Not saying you are doing so, but it can be fatally dangerous to assume crazy equates to stupid. Underestimate your enemies at your peril. Had the world not initially written Hitler off as little more a harmless rambling lunatic who could be bought off by appeasment, they would have squashed the nasty little bug while he was weak. Instead, the world waited till the Nazis was poised to control most of Europe, and 10 million lives were lost in WWII as a direct result of inaction.

But I digress. This is a writers thread. I find it personally great fun to develop a character who is evil and formidable in the extreme, but carries that one little and benign flaw that is the seed of his undoing. I have so much fun making it all crumble for him right as total victory is at hand. Like Randal Flagg in "The Stand".

[Slammr (imported)]

Not saying you are doing so, but it can be fatally dangerous to assume crazy equates to stupid. Underestimate your enemies at your peril. Had the world not initially written Hitler off as little more a harmless rambling lunatic who could be bought off by appeasment, they would have squashed the nasty little bug while he was weak. Instead, the world waited till the Nazis was poised to control most of Europe, and 10 million lives were lost in WWII as a direct result of inaction.

But I digress. This is a writers thread. I find it personally great fun to develop a character who is evil and formidable in the extreme, but carries that one little and benign flaw that is the seed of his undoing. I have so much fun making it all crumble for him right as total victory is at hand. Like Randal Flagg in "The Stand".

And that's what makes Hitler such a fascinating character. Had he been a fictional character, he would have been too outrageous to be believable.

He was not stupid by any means. On the contrary, he was a genius. Otherwise, he couldn't have accomplished what he did. His problem was that, a megalomaniac, he was mad, and he surrounded himself with people like himself, Goering, Himmler, Goebbels, and the lot. They saw the world as they wanted it to be, not as it actually was.

If Hitler hadn't constantly interfered with his generals, and if he hadn't listened to Goering, the Germans would have likely won WWII.

The figure of ten million is much too low. Russia: 23,100,000, Germany: 7,293,000, Yugoslavia: 1,027,000, UK: 450,400, Jews: 6,000,000, Romania: 833,000, Italy: 454,500, France: 562,000, and another couple million throughout Europe. The death toll for all of WWII, including the war with Japan, was about 71 million.

[A-1 (imported)]

Not saying you are doing so, but it can be fatally dangerous to assume crazy equates to stupid. Underestimate your enemies at your peril. Had the world not initially written Hitler off as little more a harmless rambling lunatic who could be bought off by appeasment, they would have squashed the nasty little bug while he was weak. Instead, the world waited till the Nazis was poised to control most of Europe, and 10 million lives were lost in WWII as a direct result of inaction.

But I digress. This is a writers thread. I find it personally great fun to develop a character who is evil and formidable in the extreme, but carries that one little and benign flaw that is the seed of his undoing. I have so much fun making it all crumble for him right as total victory is at hand. Like Randal Flagg in "The Stand".

No, crazy does not equate to stupid, but 'crazy' is a word with no legal or medical definition, yet everyone 'knows' what it means... or do we?

Many who do not understand often say 'crazy' but the wise might say 'crazy like a fox' which would mean that ambition appears to the reasonable as hopless, and futile, hence, 'insane', or 'crazy' if you will.

The problem with Hitler was that he believed in his psychosis and was so engaging that he sucked others into his personal insanity. Of course, one might say that in the vernacular of these days that Hitler was a "DICK" and in that manner always was seen with nuts. But certainly, he was more a "dick" than the rest were nuts...

I prefer to equate his evil to pure evilness and his 'intelligence' to a well-maintained illusion fueled by his mental imbalances.

He was just a BAAAD Man...