Go read XY-n 12 RIGHT NOW!!!

[Bboy]

You will be sorry if you don't!

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/X/ea_0332xy_n_12_.htm

I am swoooooning with delight!

[JesusA (imported)]

Bboy has it exactly right. Powerful characters. Compelling story line. About as perfect as writing can get!

[Charlieje (imported)]

WOW! Paolo, you outdo yourself with every chapter. BRAVO!!!

[androboy (imported)]

Paolo,

xyn-12 is beautiful -- another fantastic part to an already amazing story. thanks for sharing it with us.

david

[Paolo]

Thanks. Flattery will get you everywhere! I really don't know how long it's going to be until 13 comes out. I've been trying to keep the pieces small, but I'm not sure where to enter into 13. I did have a question (actually a few) concerning the end of part 9; it makes the plot easier to follow if you disregard the very end of 9 and "think" that it belongs on 12, where I put it. It seemed like a good idea at the time of 9, but just leaving Jayk for almost a whole Cycle didn't sit well when I began 10.