Gladiator scenario

[ChemistryKid (imported)]

I'm thinking of using this for my next story. What do you think?

The rules in the arena are simple. Two gladiators go in wearing any armor and wielding any weapons, so long as their groins are left exposed. This is to fuel the excitement of the audience, of course, by leaving our genitals open to view. For a man like myself, losing means either death or the ruin of either my penis or testicles. For a woman, losing means death or being raped by her male opponent.

Women rarely fight other women, because the rules demand death for one of the gladiators as the only way to end such a match. In fact, women rarely fight at all, for gladiators are not slaves; we are paid for each fight that we win.

No gladiator fights more than he must for the money that he needs, because to fight and lose means ruin. A man who has been emasculated must survive as a slave, no matter the reason for his condition. A vast number of the slaves who work so hard to support your way of life are gladiators who have had their manhoods taken in the arena.

And of course, for any free woman to be raped by a free man means to be owned by that man until his death or emasculation. Many male gladiators have risen to the upper class on the backs of slave women who were once proud gladiators. Even those who want to free their slave women are forbidden to do so by our arcane laws: a slave only becomes free if his or her master is made a slave.

The women who are conquered by the male gladiators are frequently sold directly after the fight and the money automatically becomes part of the winner's pay, unless he chooses to keep the loser for himself.

Defeated men are given no such niceties. Not only do they lose part of their bodies and are forced into slavery, they are left without owners nor money and must find masters without help.