I've recently been thinking of a chemical penectomy, where chemicals are used to destroy a man's penis. I wrote it all up in a story about a scientist working in a chemistry lab do discovers a drug that he thinks is just what his penis has been needing. It all turns out badly in the end.
I called in Chemistry Nightmare: http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/C/ea_44147chemistr.htm
It's the first story that I've actually put down on paper, so I'm really hoping for a review or a PM about it. Just let me know what you thiink so that I can make my next one even better. I really enjoyed writing this one.
Just imagine someone throwing burning chemicals onto your groin while you've got a rock hard cock, then seeing yourself melt away.
Chemical Penectomy?
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Re: Chemical Penectomy?
Great story, I really enjoyed it. Not Keen on the rape part as thats not my thing at all. But apart from that, it was a cracking story. Also a good happy ending (well allmost) 
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I'm glad that you liked it!
I like my stories to get a little rough so that it's believable when he loses his penis. The violence that he commits for the rape is a foreshadowing of what will happen to him and it also makes it poetic justice.
I don't like those stories were there is no conflict, where the guy wants to lose it, then loses it and everyone is happy. Give me a rapist who gets ruined, that's so much better.
I like my stories to get a little rough so that it's believable when he loses his penis. The violence that he commits for the rape is a foreshadowing of what will happen to him and it also makes it poetic justice.
I don't like those stories were there is no conflict, where the guy wants to lose it, then loses it and everyone is happy. Give me a rapist who gets ruined, that's so much better.
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I've seen lots of ads for those dick creams you can buy online... you know, fill a condom half full of this stuff, wedge your dick in and let it soak over night. It's nto like those businesses are totally legit, it is entirely plausible that a 'bad batch' went out...
Or maybe there's a good batch.. but some bigdicked guy's girlfriend gets tired of himconstantly slamming his newly enhanced pride into her, so she replaces it with something of her own...
Or maybe there's a good batch.. but some bigdicked guy's girlfriend gets tired of himconstantly slamming his newly enhanced pride into her, so she replaces it with something of her own...
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Re: Chemical Penectomy?
Sydion (imported) wrote: Mon Feb 26, 2007 8:10 pm I've seen lots of ads for those dick creams you can buy online... you know, fill a condom half full of this stuff, wedge your dick in and let it soak over night.
Wow, that's a really great idea! I've been in a writing slump for a few days, but this is just the sort of motivation that I need!
Does anyone know a link to one of those ads?