Cleopatra the Emasculator - Erratum

[Pueros]

Siti seems to have become Siki by the end of the story. Please accept my apologies for the error, seemingly made by confusing the name with Miki, a character in 'Todd'.

I hope that it did not spoil the tale for anyone. The youth's name should indeed be Siti!

PUEROS

[Bboy]

But have promised Pueros that I would correct the spelling, It's just shy of 1am and I just walked through the door.

My apologies to Pueros and everyone ... I had fully intended to get it corrected before now. Pueros actually emailed me to try to get it done BEFORE posting but I was away from home so promoted the story before I got his note.

Please be patient -- I am checking messages now and will probably have to get to bed but I promise it will be fixed when I get up in the morning.

Bryan

[Bboy]

I just went ahead and made the changes tonight. As Pueros said, I hope my delay didn't hinder anyone's enjoyment of this great story.

Thanks Pueros ... for everything!

[Pueros]

Thanks Bboy for all your hard work, not only in correcting my mistake but for everything you do for this site!

The last thing you need is a writer to make a silly boob or, should I say, given associated story, boobs!?

PUEROS

[Farrell_Squire (imported)]

I figured out that Siki was Siti. No problem. I still enjoyed the story.

Farrell

[no dick (imported)]

not a very good story

[Paolo]

I rather enjoyed it. Perhaps an asp might have added to the story? So, was it the plot, the grammar, the characters, or what, that made it "not a very good story" for you? Perhaps a bit more CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be useful to the Author. I am sure that he would appreciate that, sort of like quality feedback; I know I would, were I producing a defective product for the masses. Please, do expand your thoughts there.:tongueout

[Pueros]

Thanks Paulo for your defence.

I did ask for critical feedback about my first attempt at a straight story on this board but a 5-word response wasn't ideal.

If the person concerned really wants me to improve future tales, a little more of his literary wisdom and advice would have been appreciated.

I actually had plans for a (short) 'Cleopatra II' but will probably just return to concentrate on reaching chapter 500 of 'Lycian Prince'!

PUEROS