Shrinky Dinks

[solidcaliber (imported)]

First off, I LOVED this story. Very cool, very erotic. It was very well-written, and coherent. The only issue I had with it was that the characters were pretty much interchangable. Everyone was an athletic male with an interest in cock-shrinking. I found myself ignoring the names as I read on, because it wouldn't make a difference which name it was. Many thanks to the author!

[Zoroaster (imported)]

hehe. this is something i've talked about before, but my characters are often interchangeable, and that's entirely intentional. my philosophy on erotic fiction is that what appeals to me is only ever going to be tangentially appealing to other people - we all get off on different things, we just have common themes. I prefer to only give the details necessary to make the story work, and allow the reader to make up whatever they want to - hence, if you were into chubby guys or black dudes or hairy men or whatever, you can imagine them any way you want to.

and thanks fer the compliments.

[Falcon (imported)]

just a thought Z, one of my favorite characters in your stories is the older guy who does stubbing in his tattoo shop, and also the older dudes in 'kudzu". there are probably a lot of guys who would like some younger guy/older mentor stuff.

keep up the good work, the minute i see your name on a new story, i get aroused !

terry

[Zoroaster (imported)]

heh. i'll keep it in mind, but my stories tend to direct me more than the other way around.

fwiw - in my mind my characters tend to be around the same age as me - back in the early days of the archive my characters tended to be around 19 or 20, now they're usually mid-to-late 20's, heh. gimme a few decades and I'm sure my protagonists'll age too.

[george2u2 (imported)]

Zoroaster,

I think I remember a story about Dan back in 1997 when the index to the Archive printed all of the stories on one page.

Just think of the changes in just a few years.

What would we do if we did act on our fantasies.

I still think that your most erotic story isn't in the archive index.

Keep your imagination, after all the brain is the largest sex organ!!!!

Thanks again for all the entertainment.

[Zoroaster (imported)]

Hmmm...which story? I might have it at home still.