Hi there,
Hope you enjoy the naughty story I am writing "Amys pet project"
I have additional chapters, but I would like your suggestions.
In your opinion, what would be a humuliating situation for Stevie?
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Amys pet project
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Re: Amys pet project
I hate to see any post go unanswered, particularly from someone who has posted a story. Comments on stories are few and far between.
So here is what I would have to say. Story is well written, and comprehensible. Having tendancy towards incomprehensibility myself, this is good. There were no glaring errors in spelling that detracted from the story.
Keep swinging, even if you can't hit one out of the park, at least you may get a single.
frb
So here is what I would have to say. Story is well written, and comprehensible. Having tendancy towards incomprehensibility myself, this is good. There were no glaring errors in spelling that detracted from the story.
Keep swinging, even if you can't hit one out of the park, at least you may get a single.
frb