My Boyfriends' Fantasy by Superior Female

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My Boyfriends' Fantasy by Superior Female

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Nicely written story. She dominates and then castrates her ex-boyfriend. She could use some help with spelling and grammar, but the spell / grammar checkers in modern wordprocessors do a great job. I wouldn't object to encountering her in the woods.
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