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I liked this one. All the elements were there, well written, and put together in a very hot and logical read. Even the ending carried the reader through the logical conclusion, and beyond, and there were no strings left hanging and no questions unanswered.
Nice work!
-Nathan
Strip Jacked Naked
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Nathan (imported)
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Re: Strip Jacked Naked
I thank Nathan for his kind comments.
I should, however, perhaps express amazement that his were the only remarks, positive or negative, received by me in respect of a story that has gained in excess of 12,000 'hits'. On the other hand, I recall that I myself have been very negligent of late in my own support of the noticeboard (for which I herewith humbly apologise) &, as they say, people in glass houses........
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I should, however, perhaps express amazement that his were the only remarks, positive or negative, received by me in respect of a story that has gained in excess of 12,000 'hits'. On the other hand, I recall that I myself have been very negligent of late in my own support of the noticeboard (for which I herewith humbly apologise) &, as they say, people in glass houses........
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Re: Strip Jacked Naked
I too liked this story a lot.
Well written and the villain got what he deserved.
I've liked a few stories, but have also neglected to post feedback - until now.
Story most appreciated.
Jamie.
Well written and the villain got what he deserved.
I've liked a few stories, but have also neglected to post feedback - until now.
Story most appreciated.
Jamie.