Lucinda part 2

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topbazuka (imported)
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Lucinda part 2

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your ending of this story was terribly dissapointing. your started out great and then left everyone hanging. if your heroin lusted for young balls she should have taken them and you should have described how. perhaps next time youll take time in preparing a justfiable ending to your story.
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Re: Lucinda part 2

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I, for one, didn't sense that we were at an end. Perhaps you should give the author a chance to complete his/her story.

I wonder if you might have a contribution to the story board yourself?
topbazuka (imported) wrote: Thu Feb 12, 2004 9:27 am your ending of this story was terribly dissapointing. your started out great and then left everyone hanging. if your heroin lusted for young balls she should have taken them and you should have described how. perhaps next time youll take time in preparing a justfiable ending to your story.
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Re: Lucinda part 2

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Hmmm...

My heroin always lusted for large veins. I always seemed to have one, too.

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