Nut Cutting Fetish part 1
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Re: Nut Cutting Fetish part 1
The only fault I find with this story is the quotation punctuations.
Example: "It makes me hot," she said.
Notice the comma inside the quote.
Other than that, it was very nice. Hoping to see part 2 soon.
Example: "It makes me hot," she said.
Notice the comma inside the quote.
Other than that, it was very nice. Hoping to see part 2 soon.
