Looking for feedback, Sunday Balls

[SirNicholas (imported)]

Hiya, just wondering what people think of my third story to be posted here in the EA. I don't post very often, and so I'm eager to get some points of view.

Naturally, satisfied customers are encouraged to share theirs!

Thanks

Nick

[Shortie (imported)]

Hiya, just wondering what people think of my third story to be posted here in the EA. I don't post very often, and so I'm eager to get some points of view.

Naturally, satisfied customers are encouraged to share theirs!

Thanks

Nick

Hi, SirNicholas,

Both my wife and I have read your latest submission. She liked it more than I, but both of us found the concept worth exploring.

Both of us thought that more time should be spent developing the motivation for the men wanting to be controlled in such a way. Nothing makes me hotter than a story about a male character being slowly guided to an acceptance of a woman's dominance, until he finally actively cooperates in his own unmanning.

Please don't expect to get much feedback from the readers on this Website. My two most popular stories have been accessed more than 8,000 times each, and the reviews have been almost non-existent. I'm sure the problem lies in the fact that the method for submitting feedback involves clicking a line of text at the beginning of the story, rather than a plainly labelled button at the end. Just a thought. Maybe the readers are so exhausted by cumming multiple times while reading that they have no strength left to write a review.

[SirNicholas (imported)]

LOL. Well thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to reply. For me, the art of writing is unfinished if I don't have, and know, that others enjoy it! I assume that the reason no one replies is because: 1. It doesn't fit their particular interest 2. the nature of the subject matter, being so personal and sexual simply puts people off sharing their own views in a public forum, or 3. as you said, they simply get off, and then log off! lol

Oh well, I just hope some people enjoy it. I certainly had a GREAT time writinging it *blush. lol

Thanx again,

Nick

[frb (imported)]

Personally I'd not be disappointed at not receiving any feedback. Lots of us on this site are 'lurkers'. We stay in the shadows. If you get even one feedback it is a lot. A better idea is to look at your story statistics when it gets above a certain number, you know people are going back and re reading the story.

Personally, I was raised with three older sisters, it is akin to having four mothers bossing you around, female domination is not my favorite subject. But having said that your story seems to be well written.

frb