baby shower

[yankee masha (imported)]

Is it me or the weather, but I can't make heads or tales out of Baby Shower...tying up loose ends. What is going on? Everyone reads it. Who is Mikey? Is there a baby in there getting seriously circumcised? What?

[Paolo]

Ya got me grabbed.

I let it out on a technicality.

I think it's about time to up the standards of what gets posted here, whether it makes anyone scream or not.

[frb (imported)]

Sorry, thought that a note had been entered that the story wouldn't make sense unless you read the first story by the same primary title.

frb

[Paolo]

No wonder I was confused.

Between all the different languages and computers and such that I've had to deal with today, I'm lucky I got this far!

No offense intended, frb.

It's been one of those days.

[frb (imported)]

No offense taken. My age sometimes gets me confused between what I intend to do and what is actually done. Technically it is CRS that has gotten me.

frb

[yankee masha (imported)]

Sorry, thought that a note had been entered that the story wouldn't make sense unless you read the first story by the same primary title.

frb

AHA! So there is a previous story that would make this one make sense. Thank you. If you want to talk "aging," grab a cup of hot toddy and sit down with me here by the fire. I will look for the previous ones, frb. The puzzlement was that you are such a good writer but there were these gaps in the story.

But in general i think it would be nice if the overall editing quality of most of the stories would become a reality. Some of those things are annoying to read to the point I tend to shy away unless it is a writer like nathan or pueros or one of the ones "proven" to take the time to publish something readable.

[frb (imported)]

In the future shall endeavor to be more careful and add chapters to long stories.

As to age, when it was said 'Let there be light.' I threw the switch in squad bay two.

frb