The "Simon" series of stories

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How about having a spaying (female castration) story as part of the Simon series involving Melanie or one of her female friends to reduce her sex drive/prevent puberty/prevent her becoming pregnant. This could also involve clitoridectomy as well (perhaps).
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Somehow, I feel that this abrupt change of track would not be consistent in the "Simon Universe" as it were. The whole series of stories, whether together or viewed separately, focuses on the neutering of schoolboys by those who control their lives. The "Female" topic just wouldn't fit in anywhere with it.

I mean, not to be rude or anything, but I've sort of come to have "adopted" Simon, more so than any other Archive character ever created. I just can't see it happening.http://www.eunuch.org/vbulletin/images/ ... ferent.gif
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If you've read my "profile" you'll have seen that though a septuagenarian, I still enjoy fucking girls. I was with one of these the other day; a call-girl of course, name of Hannah, nice kid, 22, black underwear, shaved love-mound, the lot. Generally these girls let you talk about anything, if it brings you off more quickly. So I outlined the theme of the "Simon" stories, and how the central character and his friends had their balls pricked. "Yes!" Hannah broke in. "It's fascinating! They have their balls pricked and they dry up, and afterwards their cocks stay limp and they can't "do it!". She was shaking all over at the thought of it.

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Good lord, Mr. Van D.... talk about life imitating art :o !!One couldn't ask for a better response. Did you perchance end up calling her 'Melanie" by the end of the visit? :D

Not to suck up or anything (slurp) but thanks again for the recent continuation on the Simon universe. I recall you did a series of vignettes (sp?), using a script-writing method; those were particularly fun.
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Good morning, Stefan Is Me.

No, I just kept to Hannah. If I'd called her Melanie she might have thought I was going senile, and I don't think I am just yet. (At 76 I'm still working for myself, part-time, as an auditor/accountant.)

As for "vignettes" I'm presently messing about with the theme, widely reported in the UK press, of an 11 year old boy getting his 15 year old girlfriend pregnant. There were many doubts expressed at the time, whether so young a boy could actually be fertile. DNA tests showed that he wasn't the father anyway.

To be acceptable to EA, the 11 year old will have to get his balls pricked at some stage and I haven't got my head round that one yet.

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