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Have You Ever Heard of an Asshole Peasant? [G]

Submission Date: 2024-09-04 By: Polaroid (ryandcr at icloud dot com)

[confinement] [Gay] [Testicles] - Fiction

NOTE: It's trippy and I don't quite get it!

Even today, the word Homosexual translates as Eunuch in the native language. Historically, a Eunuch was an emotionally immature, sexually incompetent male. There is a place where the tradition of Eunuch is upheld by a Western enclave called The Foreign Monastery.
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Possessed [Bi]

Submission Date: 2024-09-04 By: zipper

[Bi] [body swap] [character death] [General Warning] [Minor] [Testicles] - Fiction

An old man's fountain of youth experience goes awry.

Technically, these came in in August, but I was busy. SORRY!
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Hanging Loose [G]

Submission Date: 2024-09-17By: Aden Roberts

[Gay] [Minor] [minor late teens] [minor side character] [Nullification] [S&M]flag - Fiction

NOTE: As I read it, our hero in this story has turned 18 or soon will by the time the action hits. There is a bit of minor-aged backstory.

A young man with a large endowment discovers at an early age that he likes to have pain inflicted on his genitals. It turns out that he has to endure a bit more pain than he had bargained for.
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Bonasera's Vengeance [Bi]

Submission Date: 2024-09-22 By: Silvius Rex

[fanfiction] [Gay] [Godfather] [punishment] [Straight] [Testicles] [torture] - Fiction

Description - The movie The Godfather starts with an interview between the eponymous Godfather, Don Corleone, and an undertaker by the name of Bonasera. It is the Don’s daughter’s wedding day, and on this day, tradition dictates that anyone can come to the Don and ask a favour.

Bonasera’s favour is revenge. His daughter was going out with an American college boy who attempted to rape her along with his college friend, and left her permanently disfigured. Bonasera sought justice through the courts, but because the two boys have powerful family connections, they received a suspended sentence. And so Bonasera comes seeking justice, at a time he knows the Don is not supposed to deny him. He asks for the Don to kill the two college boys.

The Don is offended by Bonasera’s request, partly because he feels slighted at being made out as a simple killer, and party because Bonasera has been reluctant to seek the Don’s friendship or support before now. But when Bonasera makes the appropriate gestures of fealty, he agrees to act, but not completely. The boys will not be killed. They will however suffer as Bonasera’s daughter did.

In the books, Mario Puzzo details some of that vengeance, and describes the boys receiving a beating at the hands of a henchman of Fat Clemenza, one Paulie Gatto and his offsiders, who administer a beating sufficient to leave the two boys permanently changed.

What Mario Puzzo could not write because of certain prejudices of the time, was the true story of what happened to Kevin Moonan and Jerry Wagner, which would be enough to have the book banned.

Here then is the true story of Bonasera’s vengeance, and the architect of that vengeance, who was not the slick but ultimately double dealing Paulie. And a warning that would echo in New York society long after the two boys had disappeared from view too ashamed and ridiculed. Read on.

The movie The Godfather starts with an interview between the eponymous Godfather, Don Corleone, and an undertaker by the name of Bonasera. It is the Don’s daughter’s wedding day, and on this day, tradition dictates that anyone can come to the Don and ask a favour.

Bonasera’s favour is revenge. His daughter was going out with an American college boy who attempted to rape her along with his college friend, and left her permanently disfigured. Bonasera sought justice through the courts, but because the two boys have powerful family connections, they received a suspended sentence. And so Bonasera comes seeking justice, at a time he knows the Don is not supposed to deny him. He asks for the Don to kill the two college boys.

The Don is offended by Bonasera’s request, partly because he feels slighted at being made out as a simple killer, and party because Bonasera has been reluctant to seek the Don’s friendship or support before now. But when Bonasera makes the appropriate gestures of fealty, he agrees to act, but not completely. The boys will not be killed. They will however suffer as Bonasera’s daughter did.

In the books, Mario Puzzo details some of that vengeance, and describes the boys receiving a beating at the hands of a henchman of Fat Clemenza, one Paulie Gatto and his offsiders, who administer a beating sufficient to leave the two boys permanently changed.

What Mario Puzzo could not write because of certain prejudices of the time, was the true story of what happened to Kevin Moonan and Jerry Wagner, which would be enough to have the book banned.

Here then is the true story of Bonasera’s vengeance, and the architect of that vengeance, who was not the slick but ultimately double dealing Paulie. And a warning that would echo in New York society long after the two boys had disappeared from view too ashamed and ridiculed. Read on.
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Minor bug - the description repeats the same intro twice... Both above and in the story. (the story itself is well written and good...)

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I thought I'd fixed that... oh well. Must have copied the wrong version...
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They Fixed Me! [S]

Submission Date: 2024-09-27 By: notaveragejoe

[Female] [incest] [mastectomy] [Minor] [minor late teens] [Nullification] [Straight] - Fiction

Robert and Diane are brother and sister and are caught in the act by their mother. She has them fixed.
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