Gangs Balls & Payback Time

[deanglass (imported)]

Thanks, Nathan for another great story. Just what I like to read about, including the methods. But what about the kid? Why not do him also, along with the 2 neighbor kids? Thanks again.

[Charlieje (imported)]

Nathan indicated at the beginning of this story he was curious how far he could take this storyline. Well, Nathan, it's obvious you haven't reach the end of the line yet.

OUCH!!! Fire ants??? Remind me never to piss Nathan off. I've had some experience with those bad boys, and they HURT!!!!

As usual, good job. As for castrating the kids, well deanglass I'm afraid I cannot agree with you. I suspect if you knew Nathan a little better you'd know that simply isn't an option.

[Nathan (imported)]

Thanks for the comments. It's always nice to hear from readers and find out that the work that went into a story stirred an emotion or in some way connected with the reader.

I liked this one. I think for one thing, the things left unsaid were very intriguing, and you almost can't help but wonder what happened when Susan and her son showed up from their game. I mean, there he was, still humping the ground, almost mad by then perhaps with the feelings that were overwhelming him.

Did the doctors save his cock? So many possibilities there---if you like happy endings then perhaps they did, and a few months later with a few hormone patches he was back doing the deed almost like nothing had happened. Almost. But then again, perhaps it didn't work out quite that way.

Did she keep him as her husband? Again, so many possibilities. I like to think she did, even if he was totally neutered. She did have something to do with it. Still, there would be changes in the family. What would the kid think? Would he still listen to his father the same way? Or would he become the new "man" of the family? Ah...now that's an interesting thought!

As for hurting the kids....nah. I mean, having them in the story allowed for the contrast, between a growing budding boy sprouting his way into manhood and a man being unmanned. It also made it somewhat possible to believe that perhaps Chris Harriman could pull it off. It wouldn't do to let him get caught because that would end the series, and hell, if that happened then my mind couldn't come up with another saga. So, the kid provided a means to keep his parents from talking, and hopefully, I presented that part in such a way to make it believable.

I've received quite a few emails on this one, so I struck a few nerves. Some not-so-positive, but most favorable. The comments, pro and con, are always welcome, and I really mean that.

Thanks again....

[Unregistered (imported)]

nathan, your spanking stories are really good. Could you do one with some ballbusting (kneeing for example) in it? Thanks

[greeneg (imported)]

I just wanted to say that I thought

the way the kid was handled was

very proper. The facts that they named

him after the older Chris and that they

needed a reason not to talk were a

potent combination.

Besides, it's not over.

The two Chris'es are over 15 years apart

in age and the older one can't do this

forever. Maybe the younger one eventually

gets tired of his suburban upbringing,

starts listening to gangsta rap while

in college (in a town up near the older

Chris's turf), and decides to start leading

a double life (student by day, gangster

by night). Or maybe his Dad disapproves

and the tuition money is no longer forth-

coming, so he has to turn to crime to

put himself through college.

And maybe he's not initially good at

it, and gets into a jam, but lo and behold, somebody bails him out... who

could that somebody be?

[kellycrawford (imported)]

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-P

[kellycrawford (imported)]

Please get acquainted with the forums and the Archive in general before you start running amok on the boards and story submissions.

If this keeps up, you and your IP will be banned.

Thank you.

THE MANAGEMENT

[Nathan (imported)]

Just a short comment--obviously "something" must have happened here...... But I did want to say "thanks" to all the many people who wrote to me about this story in particular and the "Gangs" series in general. I just never know about a story, and for some reason, this one "grabbed" a few by the nads I guess and they weren't shy about telling me so.

You have no idea how the many comments helped. Thanks to all who made them.

-Nathan

[Charlieje (imported)]

Nathan,

Your story grabbed me, BIG-TIME! They always do! But it wasn't by the 'nads... that would be very difficult to do. I don't even know myself where my 'nads are! Nevetheless keep 'em coming... Personally I have been suffering by something of a writiers' block lately, but you and others have given me a few ideas.

[Bboy]

I just want to throw in a reminder here that fiction regarding minors, and authors who use such plots in their stories does not mean in any way that that author or the Archive believes in castrating children.

Some of the best stories on the Archive involve teens and children, and not only for erotic content, for emotional and thought provoking content as well.

There are people who refuse to read anything with minors, which is why we put that tag as one of our descriptions.

I just wanted to point out, not that you necessarily meant it this way Charlie, that there's no connection to an author having minor characters involved with castration and whether that author is a "good" or "bad" person.

B

As usual, good job. As for castrating the kids, well deanglass I'm afraid I cannot agree with you. I suspect if you knew Nathan a little better you'd know that simply isn't an option.