Chapter 8: Alex and the Coyote

[rogerwpbfl (imported)]

Another single chapter from a separate story I recently started. Looking for any kind of input on the writing style for this scene.

Also, this is my second story excerpt posting for today. Please let me know if the Forum leaders prefer to not have these excerpts posted here, or if there is a better place for me to share them. Thanks!

Chapter 8: Alex and the Coyote

Alex was frozen in place as the coyote approached him. The wild animal was cautious, its eyes never leaving the large member that was hanging from Alex's naked groin. The coyote was a creature of the wild, a survivor that had adapted to the changing landscapes of America. It was a member of the dog family, but it was far from domesticated. It was a predator, and right now, it was eyeing its prey.

The coyote moved closer, its nose twitching as it sniffed the air. It could smell the fresh scent of the curious member, a scent that was strangely enticing. The coyote moved closer, its tongue slipping out to lick its lips. Then, with a suddenness that took Alex by surprise, the coyote leaned in and licked his vulnerable penis.

The coyote's tongue was a rough, wet instrument of exploration, but the sensation was not unpleasant. In fact, it was incredibly arousing. Alex could feel his member hardening, growing to its full length under the coyote's ministrations. The animal’s tongue slid over the growing member, tracing the veins that pulsed with life, swirling around the sensitive head, and dipping into the slit at the tip. Each lick was slow, deliberate, and tantalizingly thorough. The coyote seemed to be savoring the taste, its eyes half-closed in pleasure as it continued its oral exploration.

Alex was helpless against the onslaught of sensations. He gasped, his body shuddering at the unexpected sensation. His member, traitorous in its arousal, responded to the beast’s attention. It hardened, growing larger and more prominent. It was as if it was presenting itself to the coyote, offering itself up to be taken. The member throbbed with need, its size making it an even more enticing prize for the wild animal.

The coyote seemed to sense the change, its eyes narrowing as it continued to lick the member. Then, in one surreal moment, almost too intense to be real, it happened. The coyote, having worked the member to full arousal, now had its jaws clamped around the base. Alex's body tensed, his eyes wide with a mixture of fear and anticipation. Marianne watched, her breath hitching in her throat.

Then, there was a sound. It was a loud, audible crunch, a sound that echoed through the quiet backyard. It was the sound of the member being detached from Alex's hips. The coyote shook its head a bit, the member still clamped in its jaws. Alex screamed, but the coyote was already running off, the member held firmly in its jaws.

As the coyote disappeared into the woods, Alex fell to his knees, his hands clutching at his groin. He could hardly believe what had just happened. In this new scenario, he had just lost his penis for a fourth time, this time to a wild animal. But as he looked down at his groin, he could already see another member starting to grow.

Meanwhile, Marianne was watching the whole scene from a distance, her body trembling with arousal. The sight of the coyote taking Alex's member had been incredibly erotic. The sight pushing her over the edge. Her body shook with the force of her orgasm, her cries echoing in the quiet night. As she came down from her high, she watched as another member began to grow from Alex's groin. The cycle was starting again, and Marianne could hardly wait to see what would happen next.

[WheelyCurious]

Absent context that presumably would have been in previous chapters, I found it a bit puzzling - Was Alex restrained? If not why was he just standing there, etc...

The last paragraph or two did presumably clear the puzzle - if it had grown back before, being willing to lose it made more sense since presumably it would grow back again (and it is...)

Otherwise pretty good...

WheelyCurious