Paolo wrote: Fri May 26, 2023 4:04 pmI hate to say it, LT, but as you probably already know... longer, more intricate works, with a plot and excellent writing (yes, you!) don't generate a whole of feedback on here. I do hope that you continue this 5-star work! I know I will be reading and rating it, but also hoping that you are deriving intrinsic satisfaction (as I do from writing) - because you probably won't get much here!
I hate to say it, LT, but as you probably already know... longer, more intricate works, with a plot and excellent writing (yes, you!) don't generate a whole of feedback on here. I do hope that you continue this 5-star work! I know I will be reading and rating it, but also hoping that you are deriving intrinsic satisfaction (as I do from writing) - because you probably won't get much here!Oh, certainly that is the case. I went into this knowing that, and have often told the authors here the same thing. I know a couple people were enjoying "Life as it Should be" before it went on hiatus. I plan to return to it, but want to finish this one first, as I think it's much better. I'm sure over time people will find the "good", 'rox-off' chapters and bookmark those, then leave the lead-up and post effects chapters alone entirely. So in that, reading all the chapters gives the context, but chapter 3, which is the first where the "hero" gets his wish, is put together enough I suppose it could stand on it's own with a minor introduction.
What I've tried to capture is a good fictional story, but being realistic in how we nullos achieve our goals, how we feel as we navigate to that point, and what it's like for us after we arrive at the destination. All with a bit of tongue-in-cheek fun around it.
I just sent in Chapter 4, which deals with a significant portion of that last part, but chapter 5 will go into post-op life a bit more. Chapter 4 is the shortest so far at about 675 words, but for people who want to read what it's like for a nullo to have an orgasm, here's your chance. I don't think it's 100% accurate, but it captures significantly how I feel when I have one.
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