Paolo wrote: Fri May 26, 2023 9:38 am
Metamorphosis - Chapter 3: The Chrysalis Opens [G]
https://eunuchworld.co/s16478
Submission Date: 2023-05-25 By: Jack Soffonmen
[Gay] [Nullification] [Penectomy] [Testicles]
There are going to be many more chapters. I have about 4 in mind now, and the way the story is evolving it may be a LOT more. It may turn into a small novel. But I'm having fun with it, and feel energized to continue. I've gotten out in front a bit and have written a much later chapter, so I have something to work towards. Several more "main events" are coming.
Presently, there are 4 more chapters finished or in stages of VERY minor editing. A fifth additional chapter is basically written, but I'm not sure I like how it's turned out, so may go back and start over on it. There are at least 4 more chapters before we get to the second nullification in the story arc, but these additional chapters will provide background to the world Adrian inhabits, and what it means to be a nullo. Things like how relationships are found, what the body feels like, how a nullo feels sexual pleasure, etc.
Metamorphois is not meant to be a quick in-and out, let's slash their man bits off in the first 2 paragraphs in the interest of letting the reader pop his cork, good time. One key element of the story won't happen until very near the end. All I'll say at this point is there was a rather tragic and/or cruel reason the facility, Metamorphosis, came into existence.
I just hope those of you reading it will stick around long enough to find out.
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I hate to say it, LT, but as you probably already know... longer, more intricate works, with a plot and excellent writing (yes, you!) don't generate a whole of feedback on here. I do hope that you continue this 5-star work! I know I will be reading and rating it, but also hoping that you are deriving intrinsic satisfaction (as I do from writing) - because you probably won't get much here!