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Jenny (imported)
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Hi All ,

I have just read frb ,s Latest rendition "Short Cuts" as usuall he invents a nice twist at the end by slicing of the female nipple so nice

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Jenny (imported) wrote: Tue Apr 29, 2003 3:39 am Hi All ,

I have just read frb ,s Latest rendition "Short Cuts" as usuall he invents a nice twist at the end by slicing of the female nipple so nice

jenny

Yes! =:) ... but as always ... his stories are way too short !! =:( I really would like to read a long story from him!! I like his stories so much ... =:))

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Thank you for the kind words. I thought that my stories sort of got to long, and in Short Cuts I & II was trying to be compact and mysterious.

Thanks again for reading my work.

frb
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