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Mystery at Grandpa's Farm - A Family Life Prequel

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Set in the Family Life Universe, as the benefits of neutering boys are just beginning to catch on.

Twelve year old Aden Lawrence is uprooted from his life in the city, where boys are routinely neutered.

Transplanted to his grandpa's farm in a small town, where the procedure is not held in high regard, he soons finds out just how everyone feels about the subject.

With his own neutering delayed, he soon becomes best friends with the only neutered in town, and they become involved in a mystery that could threaten the pending manhood of every boy in town.

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Paolo - 2017-03-03

Again, special thanks to Jesus A. for editing and suggestions on this one.

There are 5 chapters so far, so tune in next week!

Grelberforever - 2017-05-05

Aden sure is getting a fast education about life.

Atreyu69 - 2017-06-28

A fantastic start to a new series. Thank you Paolo.

Valery_V - 2021-06-16

Remarkable and intriguyeshchy beginning. Faultless classical style. I'm delighted. Many thanks to the author!

Paolo - 2017-03-11

Tune in next week for the next installment in this serial!

Same eunuch time, same eunuch channel.

sparkey49 - 2017-03-12

One of the best stories yet!

ylpb7508 - 2017-03-13

Agree with sparkey! Mystery! Intrigue! Eunuchs! Can't wait! Thanks, Paolo!

Grelberforever - 2017-05-05

And Aden punching out the Marshall's kid; what next? Paolo, great stuff!

Valery_V - 2021-06-16

I liked a sketch: "I think it wanted to be oatmeal," Diane observed, "But failed."

Aden smiled, putting his plate down on the floor for the dog. Chief sniffed it and backed away, whining.

Valery_V - 2021-06-16

"A palm-heel-strike" is the known technology which is often used, for example, in karate. More gentle than punching.

ylpb7508 - 2017-03-18

Paolo, another great chapter. Thanks. A few more clues, a few more possible suspects.

Paolo - 2017-03-18

Thanks, ylpb.

Also, many thanks to Jesus A. for editing and research, and the footnotes.

sparkey49 - 2017-03-18

Thanks these have been probably the best reading for some time!

Nidaho Rachel - 2017-03-19

Great reading,looking forward to the next chapters!

wrangler2c - 2017-03-22

Great job, looking forward to the rest of the story.

Grelberforever - 2017-05-06

I am loving this story. The plot thickens!

Valery_V - 2021-06-17

Very much it was pleasant how the conversation between teenagers is transferred.

Paolo - 2017-03-25

Tune in next week for the next installment of this who-dunnit!

bella - 2017-03-25

excellent, thank you

sparkey49 - 2017-03-25

Can't wait the suspense is awesome each one gets better!

ylpb7508 - 2017-03-26

The plot thickens!

Grelberforever - 2017-05-06

Aden is gonna make a good detective. Clues stack up everywhere. And what about Charlie Simmonds?

Valery_V - 2021-06-18

I always believed that Sherlock Holmes was a gay.

sparkey49 - 2017-04-01

This just keeps getting better and better!

Jesus - 2017-04-01

Sparkey has it exactly right. It just keeps getting better.

Paolo - 2017-04-02

Note to readers, and thanks as well! I just noticed from my character outline that I mixed up the names. Mark was a character I tossed out, while Charlie is the suspect.

Also, don't try and use the ampersand sign (shift-7). That signals the comment script to stop, and the rest of your text is lost!

bella - 2017-04-02

Excellent again, can't wait for the next chapeter, thank you. Is Aden's older brother going appear in one of the chapeters?

Grelberforever - 2017-05-07

How exciting this is to read. Thanks for knocking Aden down to beat cop. He was just getting too big for his britches.

Valery_V - 2021-06-18

"Are you...cryin'?" "It's a side effect," Aden told, "Once you're neutered, you're a lot more sensitive."

bella - 2017-04-14

another excellent instalment thanks

sparkey49 - 2017-04-20

You have done a great job again!!

Grelberforever - 2017-05-07

This plot's got more twists and turns than an old river! Gotta love it!

Valery_V - 2021-06-18

It seems that Grandpa's Farm is the safest place for all guys...

Paolo - 2017-04-13

This got posted before 6...you may want to go back and read 6, too! Sorry.

And a note to readers - 8 will be delayed until after my busy season of work is over. It's going to be rough.

bella - 2017-04-14

hope your work goes well - will have to be patient for the next episode - excellent as always

ylpb7508 - 2017-04-17

What? You're going to leave us hanging? LOL!

Paolo - 2017-04-20

Yeah, well you pretty much know whodunnit, it's just a matter of getting time to finish it!

sparkey49 - 2017-04-20

Great job and will be a tough wait! Thanks

Grelberforever - 2017-05-07

We all know "who dunnit" pretty much, but it takes money to pull off exporting humans. Charley's about to come into a fist full of it. After all a good crook doesn't want to get his hands dirty, and would have an unshakable alibi. Terry and Kay not so much!

Valery_V - 2021-06-19

Remembered Dr. Kristen Geller from the history "Ricky Visits America" and how boys were prepared and "packed" for transportation

bella - 2017-06-29

great to see the story continuing, thanks

Atreyu69 - 2017-06-29

I'm loving it.

sparkey49 - 2017-06-29

Great job again will be looking forward to the next sequel!

Valery_V - 2021-06-20

It is remembered that in the nineties in Russia there were several popular TV programs similar to "Crime and Punishment".

Valery_V - 2021-06-20

At last it became clear that Terry appears the so-called dirty police officer to whom Frank did not trust for a long time.

bella - 2017-07-10

great again, another unexpected twist

hope all the boys will be safe

sparkey49 - 2017-07-10

Great job can't wait for the next!

ylpb7508 - 2017-07-11

Great job. Hope there is a wrap=up episode. And this is just a prequel!

jack thomas - 2017-10-07

Wonderful story, thank you so much for the effort.

Valery_V - 2021-06-20

I liked how Aden quickly attracted Jalen to his side.

jamiepan - 2018-10-31

* Well this made me have to sacrifice an evening to read the rest of it... what an epic! No regrets, that's for sure.

You sure do spin a tale, and no linear simplistic stuff either; you're obviously thinking this story out.

Can't tell you how nice it is to read such quality in such a small community.

You're a diamond in the dirt, mister. I will lamely mention there wasn't a lot of 'site subject matter' in this chapter, but the full story has plenty, and I sense more coming, so I really hope you take a shorter writing holiday this time!

From this, and from anything else you might write, as I notice in the archive you have a ton of stuff. You're on my watch list for sure. Thank you very much for posting.*

sparkey49 - 2018-10-31

I have enjoyed this series so much and was worried it was not continuing so thanks and looking forward to more you are such a great writer!

gellyfregy - 2018-11-02

What a wonderful surprise! Thanks for all your stories!

Jesus - 2018-11-02

* Terry down and Kay to go. I had been wondering how Terry could be eliminated without causing any twinge of guilt among the boys, even those he had himself castrated.

After all, he was Mason’s father and Mason was part of the group. No matter how it’s accomplished, no one will feel any guilt or sympathy for Kay.

Will the “higher ups” be brought to any form of justice or will they survive to prey on other boys in other communities? What will be the “GRAND FINALE” such that the boys can go on to live happily ever after?

There are more parts of this great story that we can anticipate enjoying. *

Nikolas001 - 2019-07-17

I just found this story series and could not stop reading it. It is one of the few stories I have ever read past 3 chapters. The attention to detail, story line and plot are great. Will the be another chapter?

Valery_V - 2021-06-21

* I very much liked the description how the computer cellar with studio in the house of Clyde is arranged.

'Darth Vader', Alkhasiu ("eunuch" in Arab) - the perfect monster. How did I understand, was castrated approximately at 6-year age and is on position of the slave who can be punished very cruelly and even to kill? Why he is so faithful to the owners and never tried to run away from them? *

Valery_V - 2021-06-22

* Everything is very difficult and tangled. The author does not allow to foresee a plot. It is necessary only to watch tensely how further events are developed.

The employee of social service of Kay is not simply corrupted, she is an active participant of the international gang kidnapping and trading in them.*

bella - 2020-08-16

wow! Bringing Simon, Roddy and Ricky into the story and Marty!

Amazing

Paolo - 2020-08-16

Well, they were unexpected guests! Thanks.

Valery_V - 2021-06-22

* In my opinion Pearce - the bungler.

Jalen continues to apply a hatchet successfully.

Frank remarked, "Are the British invading again?" Referring to the guys: Simon Scott, Ricky Silva and Roddy Fisher (I remember them from the 2008 story "Ricky Visits America").

Junaid ('Darth Vader', Alkhasiu), who had made a dark impression on me earlier (part 11), fortunately turned out to be a double agent. *

Valery_V - 2021-06-23

Very interesting was a direct talk of boys, their relation to a castration problem. They remembered Shaolin-based Kung Fu, from China and also the Japanese nindzya. Aden does not want to get to "the Breeder program", he wants to be castrated. Frank against it, but he should reconcile.

bella - 2020-08-19

Wow, one of the best stories on the archive from Paolo (along with Boys of Blue Creek).

gellyfregy - 2020-08-20

Thank you Paolo. I really liked the story. Family, friendships, taking care of each other, working together to take down evildoers and redeem as many as possible, with eunuchs showing as much courage and creativity (if not more) than intact guys. I look forward to more, in the Family Life universe or any others you care take me to visit.

C van D - 2020-10-27

Typical Paolo, meaning that it surpasses by a head, shoulders and half a body, the customary stuff.

Valery_V - 2021-06-24

* It was pleasant that Aden and Clayton met...

The author entitled the history "A Family Life Prequel". We can hope for continuation of this story?

Although I consider myself a nullo and I always sympathize with them, I still do not like Junaid, his ruthlessness as an assassin. He violates the laws of the country where he is, can do a lot of mischief.

In the epilog, officer Smith also behaves strangely...

It seems to me that history only begins! *

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Empirical Companion

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Set in the future, a human ruler's son demands an alien boy as debt payment to be his 'companion'.

Ardonex VII was a peaceful, technologically repressed planet in the year 2356. The society was agrarian and peaceful..

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Existence was near perfect for centuries . . . until the Humans showed up.

They came in starships bristing with weapons on a mission of conquest...

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I liked it: "average Ardonian lifespan was 200 Earth years. Senility and the usual disabilities of old age usually did not show up until age 170 or so. Sexual maturity did not begin for the average Ardonian until age 20, and took about 10 years to finish out."

Admires the level of medical equipment.

For some reason I am not surprised by desire of Erik Brett to have companion-nullo.

I like the humane attitude of people of Earth towards "companions".

The nullo'd Ardonian eunuch subconsciously put a hand to his smooth and empty groin and grinned. "It's not so bad, " he said.

- I support his thought.

Unfortunately, yet there is no continuation of this charming story.

Though it only began .

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Avenging Angel

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Let me introduce myself:

The name’s Galen.

I’m a Guardian Angel.

That’s right, Angel.

As in Heavenly Host, Semi-Divine Being, almost-Omniscient, Servant of the Almighty, the Guy with Wings and a Halo...

Wait a minute, scratch that last item. That’s only for formal wear. We don’t dress like that for work...

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Cainanite - 2012-12-30

This is one of my favorite stories. Paolo, you are an awesome writer.

Valery_V - 2020-10-14

I love all stories of this author!

Valery_V - 2021-12-01

Who knows, maybe there are guardian angels? I felt something similar behind me ...

But, of course, I never saw or heard voices .

"He even got his ears pierced. The Grands weren’t too keen on this, but since Cory pointed out several other boys with earrings, and he really whined about it, he got his way."

- Yes Yes! This is exactly what happens in families ... But really, it looks beautiful on boys.

"Now you know why your PC is loopy sometimes. That’s just US checking up on you."

- Damn, it happens like this everywhere! Always, some updates and the like. Especially the so-called anti-virus applications ...

"I have to confess, when I was a Human, I never had an orgasm. I never even got to puberty."

- I have a similar situation. Although I am not an angel and still a man.

Skateboarding! I saw how masters and non-masters work.

In my opinion, this is more dangerous than contact taekwondo.

You can easily not only lose your "eggs", but just kill yourself!

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Simon Beyond 2 (Chapters 1 ... 5)

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2 https://eunuchworld.co/s14031

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About stories "Simon Beyond":

Credit for this idea and storyline goes to the writers of the cartoon “Justice League, & Batman Beyond”. That was the inspiration, along with a few other fics I’ve read elsewhere.

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... ... But beauty was irrelevant, especially to a teenage boy like Tristan Grey. Other boys of his age (or even younger) might look at a younger woman and imagine her naked, wonder what it would be like to be with her in bed. Others would think about shoving their big, hard cocks into her awaiting moist vagina, running the risk of starting a baby with her as he satisfied his carnal lusts.

But not Tristan.

He knew full well that his soft little 1” of tightly circumcised and lonely little cock would never again harden. He knew he’d never be able to fuck a woman as real men did. He’d never know what it felt like to shoot hot seed, which he didn’t possess any of, anyway. He knew he’d never have any children of his own. With a touch of regret, despite never having experienced what he knew about heterosexual activity, he realized that this was the very thing that had brought him here... ...

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Valery_V - 2021-0

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I am impressed! This is wonderful fantasy! Professional literature. Many thanks to the author!

Valery_V - 2021-07-04

A touching and mysterious story.

Cainanite - 2013-04-07

Love it. As usual you've written an amazing story.

Longer comment to come.

StefanIsMe - 2013-04-07

I'm just ridiculously happy to see a new entry by you. THANK YOU for returning to the archive! I have to admit, I love this idea of looking farther into the future of the Simon world. I'm off to read the next chapter...

Paolo - 2013-04-07

Thanks. CvanD helped a lot with the first chapter in setting the tone of some of the characters.

Cainanite - 2013-04-07

*** 60 years into the future, and the Scott Centre is still dealing with neutered boy kidnappings. Still finding new ways to bust up rings of perverts, and put the boys in danger. What's not to love.

Paolo, you really managed to capture CvanD's style while still making it distinctly your own. Of course having CvanD himself read it and approve helps. It really puts the seal of authenticity on it.

The way that the original Simon cares for Tristan, but struggles to really show it is very touching. I think this is a very realistic portrayal of how the boy-eunuch would really turn out if he existed. Somehow he is simultaneously hard from his lifetime of experiences, and yet he remains soft and caring for the child that was created in his image. He wants to love, but he doesn't always know how.

I like Tristan too. He is a lot like the original Simon. Yet he has enough of his own personality that he isn't just a cookie cutter copy. I hope people appreciate just how narrow a beam you had to balance to accomplish that.

Extremely well done! ***

Paolo - 2013-04-07

Thank you for that glowing review!

kristoff - 2013-05-11

As usual excellent work by Paolo, but Cainanite deserves kudos as well be contributing to the ideas and writing. series derseves 5s, but u cant get the starts to take my input. Fan of simon and company.

Kristof

StefanIsMe - 2013-04-07

*** Clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-clap-clap (repeat).

Proof again that it isn't just about vignettes or scenes, as lesser writers (like me!) resort to; it's about professional plotting, characters readers care about, and giving the right details at the right time.

Thankfully, there is a Paolo . As always, we look forward to more! ***

Paolo - 2013-04-07

Thank you!

Cainanite - 2013-04-07

*** This is a story with legs. Tristan has a purpose and a mind of his own beyond what Melanie and the original Simon have planned for him. He is his own person.

He still has the same drives as the original Simon, but he is more invested. He has a sense of what his future will bring, perhaps from understanding how the original Simon Scott turned out. That knowledge colors and changes him in a very unique way. The original Simon never knew the importance of his boyhood adventures. Tristan knows.

Tristan is much more motivated than the original Simon Scott. You can see it in the way he won't give up on a missing boy, or leave Patel behind when he knows the boy needs him. The original Simon was more passive in how things all worked out. Was more willing to hand things over to the "correct" authorities and let them sort out the loose ends at the end of an adventure. Tristan knows the consequences of those loose ends and doesn't trust the authorities as the original Simon once did. Perhaps this again has to do with the passing down of knowledge from... for lack of a better definition, father to son.

I can't tell you how happy I was to see the words, "To be continued" included at the end of this chapter. There is so much for Simon II to do and experience, and I can just tell that his adventure is going to be very different from anything his father had experienced.

I can't wait for the next bit. ***

Paolo - 2013-04-07

Well, you may have to wait a bit!

Thanks for all the comments. Means a lot to me.

Cainanite - 2013-04-12

I am loving this more and more. The idea of combining the Simon Beyond world and the Batman Beyond world is simply genius.

I can't wait to see Simon/Tristan et all bump into Ghost and Growler. So much fun!

Valery_V - 2021-07-04

Devaduta strong became attached to Tristan. Tristan (Simon II) appeared in the thick of things.

Ubiquitous Terry McGinnis, legendary Bruce Wayne and gloomy Gotham City.

Tristan learns about Paxton Powers, who was mining something in South America.

After a scuffle and a fight, Tristan has new friends ...

Many thanks to the author for the exciting adventures of our beloved heroes!

I admire the fact that the author has touched on the anthropological problem of the origin of modern man.

I understand handsome Growler will tear Paxton Powers apart and free Simon ...

Serious scientists believe that man is a genetic hybrid of artificial origin. Paxton Powers knows something about this . Batman, of course, too ...

I really wanted the genius of the writer to continue this story, this topic ...

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Harry Potter and the Knife of Klingsor

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When we picture the Middle Ages, we envision monks and monasteries, knights, castles, and troubadours as well as the Inquisition, alchemists, witches, and jongleurs. However, we must bear in mind th

at emasculated men, who had been

mutilated either voluntarily or by force, also belonged in this group...

One cut of the knife, and Klingsor became a eunuch ...

Klingsor’s emasculation had unintended consequ

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eat magician, and the state of chastity that was thrust upon him bolstered his magical powers...

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After recovering from saving The Sorcerer's Stone, but before going home for the summer, Harry Potter finds out something very disturbing about a fellow Gryffindor student...

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kristoff - 2013-11-30

Wonderful story. Read the whole series anxiously waiting for each chapter to be posted

Valery_V - 2020-10-23

I am a little confused, but for some reason it is pleasant to me...

Valery_V - 2021-07-10

It is not surprising with a strongly shortened urethra to wet yourself in bed at night.

It is pleasant to me that Harry Potter fell in love with Seamus. At the same time it is very lovely that Harry hesitates and does not want to offend Ron.

Valery_V - 2021-07-10

** "Harry Potter and the like, ©JK Rowling, used without knowledge or consent. Don’t tell her!"

I swear I won't tell her anything!

Moreover, I have not read her books at all, have not even watched a single film about Harry Potter. I have no idea who she is? **

Valery_V - 2021-07-10

I don’t know (I haven’t read it yet, although I have already put down the stars) how events will unfold in the future. But for some reason I really want Hagrid to use this knife in relation to Harry ...

The legend of the Knife of Klingsor is very beautiful from my point of view of a eunuch.

Valery_V - 2021-07-11

The act of Draco Malfoy which decided to accept public punishment causes respect...

Valery_V - 2021-07-11

Ron after all has feeling of jealousy...

I liked the description of the relations of Harry and Ron. It close friends!

Valery_V - 2021-07-11

"The fireplace began to widen then, and very suddenly the room was filled with men in neat suits from the Ministry of Magic.

Darby gasped in shock as they began Apparating around them, some of them stepping out of the fireplace." - The fireplace - the excellent means of communication!

Valery_V - 2021-07-11

Amusing sketch: Harry, Ron and Darby compare and are measured by the penises.

Valery_V - 2021-07-11

To fly on a broom (haha) of course it is not comfortable, but what economy!

Valery_V - 2021-07-12

The villain of Lucius Malfoy turns into nullo Draco by means of "The magic Paste". Haha, I know people who dream to catch something similar!

Valery_V - 2021-07-12

I like elf Dobby.

You can sympathize with Draco Malfoy. He was not lucky with his parents ... The only friend of elf Dobby is not able to help him somehow.

Valery_V - 2021-07-12

Thanks to the writer Paolo for telling who and how made Draco a bad boy. The writer Rowling did not see fit to explain this to her readers.

It's great that there are good wizards who fight villains ...

Whom do we call "Muggle"? - It is a person who does not have magical powers.

Valery_V - 2021-07-13

It was pleasant to me as the sexual scene of Harry and Ron is delicately described.

Valery_V - 2021-07-13

Enormous old stove is used as the portal for instant movements. Very convenient, but still scary.

In fact, Lucius Malfoy gave his son Draco to be "devoured" by Voldemort (Mr. Riddle).

Valery_V - 2021-07-16

The owner of hotel about Riddle: "He had gold". Frank was on duty in day of arrival o

f villains and therefore died. He

’d torn his genitals off with his bare hands.

It is amusing how the press allegorically speaks about Dark Lord: "You-Know-Who".

The beautiful story told Grimaldi.

The delicate and touching relation of Oliver Wood to Harry was pleasant.

By the way. I have two vinyl records on tape: Alice Cooper "Lace and Whiskey" (77), "Billion Dollar Babies" (73). But they're not really my type. I always liked ABBA better .

Many thanks to the author for a detailed account of the dramatic events associated with the "Taking of Seamus".

Valery_V - 2021-07-16

This is a very sad chapter! Seamus, Ron, Darby sacrificed their lives ...

Harry Potter could not defeat evil ...

Valery_V - 2021-07-16

"Time’s Arrow" is ingenious turn in a plot!

Valery_V - 2021-07-16

I wanted Harry to become nullo. But I did not even imagine that Harry would do it with his own hands!

Valery_V - 2021-07-17

It's intriguingly interesting when we read about the events in which "Present-Harry" and "Former-Harry" are involved. It's not easy to describe such a difficult situation!

The writer managed to do it successfully and brilliantly.

Valery_V - 2021-07-18

“If I see you ag

ain, it will be as a friend … Time

for The Long Goodbye…” – Procol Harum.

Gary Brooker - The Long Goodbye 1985:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NMdANhM7GF4

Valery_V - 2021-07-18

I like Hermione. She is a true friend. She treats gays and eunuchs kindly. She is smart and resourceful.

It's funny that the watchmen and caretakers are portraits hanging on the walls.

The strange position of the Ministry of Magic towards Lucius Malfoy and his company.

Valery_V - 2021-07-19

Everything is very confusing. The reader is intrigued. As in a good detective story, one can only hope that this will become clear only at the end of the novel. But this is a fairy tale, not a detective story! The writer Paolo is completely unpredictable!

Valery_V - 2020-10-23

I adore the fairy tales written to Paolo!

Many thanks for Your talent

Valery_V - 2021-07-20

Explanations for the epilogue (because the reader is sad that the tale is over)

Valery_V - 2021-07-20

"Mr. Finnegan held Harry for a long time while he cried, terrified of what they were going to do to cure him." - Harry was afraid Seamus would forget him.

Valery_V - 2021-07-20

Seamus' father consoled Harry: "But he's also a Eunuch. I don't want him to have to face a lonely life with no one at his side. But look at it like this, Harry, you love him.

You may forget that for a time, but you can't go on like you are, either. True love cannot be killed, Harry, and it never dies.

“Someday you’ll remember how you feel about him. And he’ll always be in the same room with you here.

He’ll be sitting next to you in class for the next six years.

He’ll be across the table from you at meals, and he’ll be in the stands cheering you on when you chase the Snitch in your Quidditch matches.”

He paused, kissed Harry’s tear-stained cheek, and added, “And our door will always be open to you. WE will remember, even if it takes YOU a lifetime to.”

Part of Harry wanted to believe Seamus ’father, but another part of him - some part that was, deep down, ashamed of his love that most people would have frowned upon - could not accept it. Finally, he looked up and nodded.

Valery_V - 2021-07-20

"Do you have the bits?"

"Right here, safe in the purple jar."

(It is clear that Harry's genitals remained and were used to recover ...)

Seamus remained nullo as his bits were not kept ...

Valery_V - 2021-07-20

The Knife of Klingsor was destroyed by Harry.

"Well done, Harry," Dumbledore congratulated him. "The Knife of Klingsor is no more. There shall be no more Eunuch Wizards."

But former EW remained? Only the writer Paolo can know about it.

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In the not-so-distant Future, Humanity has been desecrated by the BioGenic Wars.

A shattered civilization regroups, splitting into 2 factions - Approveds and Unapproveds.

Over time, Mutations take their toll.

Cybernetic enhancement is usually the only cure.

One is either born with Implants, or is born a pure Bio with little chance of survival.

Hunters roam the Cities in search of little ones to sell to Dealers, always searching for the right combination of Mutations.

Still, other Orphans are raised in Facilities for adoption, repairs, or for parts for other Approved little ones.

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Atreyu88 - 2013-01-06

A great story. But I sort of wondered if Jayk should have been the protagonist and not just a supporting character.

Valery_V - 2021-04-18

Grandiose fantasy. In my childhood I dreamed of similar.

Valery_V - 2021-12-06

The protagonist - Xyn, XY-N, "Unapproved Bios" and Psion.

Jayk - eXY, nullo, "A Slow Mutant", at which the process of aging is slowed down in tens and more time.

Jayk, as it seems, wishes to sexual affinity with Xyn.

Xyn has left from the Facility, in which such, as he the unenviable destiny could expect.

How many times had a Bio in his care been taken away, and brought back with a bandage on his lower back or an eye missing? Or worse yet, a whole limb?

A tremendous example:

XY-C2. He had come back minus an arm AND a kidney. A few weeks later, his genitals had been taken, leaving no trace that he was an XY.

How the poor little thing had begged, when the Bots took him a third time, to just kill him. He had never come back.

But was it any better to be lost and in danger of being found by a Hunter or Dealer?

There was a huge market for young XY Bios, and not for just ‘parts’ either. It was a no-win scenario.

Valery_V - 2021-04-18

Perfectly! The truth is not believed me that asexual could write it .

Valery_V - 2021-12-06

Xyn, being a psion, unwittingly found out for himself that Jayk turned out to be a sex toy, the slave of a certain Adult, a Master. The master having a taste for little e-XY’s.

I liked remarkably described sexual scenes...

Atreyu69 - 2017-07-06

This is one of the best stories ever and yet it has only four stars and no comments but my own. What the heck is wrong with this picture?

Valery_V - 2020-10-25

It are pleasant to me all of the history Paolo. I admire his talent of the writer.

Besides he is an expert in area which once concerned personally me. I ask forgiveness for my immodesty...

Valery_V - 2021-12-07

Xyn didn’t understand why anyone would want to cut up a little XY and make him into an e-XY, or “eunuch” as some called it. He understood that some of the little Bios at the Facility were used for parts for malfunctioning or deformed Approved little ones, but that was the limit of his knowledge.

Xyn: "Perhaps the Dealer who bought Jayk from the Hunter had simply done it to be mean. But there was the lingering thought of Jayk recalling how the Master had said that it had increased his value by so much. As Property, an e-XY was worth a lot more than just an XY."

For some reason I like this interpretation and a little flattered ... I have always believed that full-fledged men are more useful for human society, compared to eunuchs .

Jayk: "What came before with my mouth pleasured you. What comes now pleasures us both. Relax, and let me do the deed, Xyn Psion".

Jayk felt, that his a**s was stimulated by Xyn’s pe**s as he rode it, yet his nonexistent one was stimulated as well as his phantom balls rose up close to his body, as Xyn’s must be doing. He groaned in the pure ecstacy that he had known that he could never experience again.

Valery_V - 2021-04-18

Very lovely: Jayk was frightened for Xyn when he met Chriss (volunteer).

Valery_V - 2021-12-08

Chriss: "Xyn’s growing up. It won’t be long until his balls start killing off his Psi and we don’t wanna lose him. He’s too important. You understand?"

Jayk: "The ones who survived the Wars found out that the only way to continue surviving was to replace the parts that failed with mechanical ones. The used to call them cyborgs, now they call them Approveds."

Jayk: "Some of mankind had survived, mutated, and adapted naturally. They called us Unapproveds."

Valery_V - 2021-12-10

Chriss voluntary became eunuch e-XY. At him is a theory, why it was necessary for making...

Valery_V - 2021-04-18

Explanation: Jayk protected Xyn, having killed certain Kel (the big man with the cybernetic eye) if I am not mistaken?

Valery_V - 2021-04-18 05:56:46

Very much the technical miracle of "the Suit" is pleasant.

Valery_V - 2021-12-10

The father replied to Edward: "They don’t let Approved little ones have Suits. That’s why you have to have the upgrade."

<- Upgrade = transformation Bios in Cyborg.

The Hunter. The suit, from a Facility that raised pure Bios for parts, had sold the Agency the suit for a small fortune. Naturally, it had paid itself of in no time. It kept the Hunter in perfect health and made him almost invincible.

The Hunter. The Agency had castrated him completely, leaving him with nothing at all between his legs except for a small hole through which to urinate.

The suit took care of that for him. To exacerbate the problem, the suit that he wore which protected him medically also kept his XY-Balance up to high levels.

He was horny as hell, very well built, rounded up stray little XY’s and XX’s for a living, and couldn’t take advantage of it.

The Hunter. He still remembered being told at the age of 14 Cycles that he was going to train for a new career.

He still remembered being told that this would require him to be castrated, genitally nullified...

The Hunter. He had watched in horror as the nurse slid a length of tubing up and inside of his penis to drain his bladder.

The tube looked like metal, but it had been flexible and left in place. Then the doctor had simply gone to work with a lazer scalpel.

It had taken only seconds to remove the scrotum and testicles, which were removed separately from his penis.

The Hunter. For an instant, he had thought that they weren’t going to remove his penis after all. He could still hear the doctor saying to someone, “Take these to Cryo, they have a backlog of orders for good young balls...

Then he had watched, silently screaming, his chest heaving, as the doctor took his numbed penis, limp and sad looking, in his hand. “You’ll want to watch this son. I hoped you jacked off and enjoyed it in your room last night, because you’ll never do it again.”

And then he had simply moved the lazer around the base, letting it burn down a bit to remove the core as well. His penis slid very slowly down and off of the metal-looking tube and that was the last he had ever seen of it...

The Hunter. The next day, he had awakened to find himself wearing the white Suit.

He would later learn what it was for, and why he could not take it off without authorization.

He could still recall the shock and fear he had felt when he had rubbed at his groin through the fabric of the Suit and felt nothing there...

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The Hunter heads for the Ruins in search of Xyn, but finds something else instead.

Xyn, having recovered his senses, heads off on a quest of his own.

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Valery_V - 2021-04-18

"Liberty Enlightening the World"

Valery_V - 2021-12-12

The Hunter flies around the famous memorial building, and it becomes known to us, the Ruins of which city are located nearby.

Valery_V - 2021-12-13

I am delighted with the self-control and nobility of Shar, who found herself in such a dramatic situation.

The Hunter realizes that he is a Psion Mutant that the Approved Society does not allow breeding, so he was nullified.

He knows that implants have been placed in him, that is, in fact, he has been turned into a cyborg. And now he is under the control of the agency, which uses him as a hunter of the Unapproveds people.

But he is burdened by his craft and is not a villain. However, he is executable, behaves very prudently, because he understands that if he does not obey orders, he can always be "repaired" and even destroyed!

After picking up Jayk, the Hunter saves his life. He sees nullo in him and sympathizes with him. (For some reason I really like it).

Very interesting castration scene of Chriss. By the way, Chriss had a theory why he needed to be castrated urgently ... Adam was the surgeon, Kel assisted. Chriss was fully conscious and felt everything!

Adam's story is also very interesting. Adam is a fugitive. Previously, he was completely emasculated and sold into slavery. The Master used Adam as a sex toy. The Master was very pleased with him until his 12th cycle. Until Adam showed the ability of the mutant "Bomber" ...

I really love that the Unapproved are well organized, behave in a civilized manner, share food with each other, help the weak, and often show touching concern for their comrades.

The Approved Society is extremely technocratic, it has become inhuman. This is a society of "modernized people", in fact, cyborgs. It is slave-owning, the living bodies of real people are used as spare parts for the repair of cyborgs!

Valery_V - 2021-12-16

Jayk: “Why did he so want to stay with me?”

- “Why, why, why?” the Hunter mused, then said wistfully, “Why ask? Maybe he was just happier with YOU.”

(An amazingly accurate and complete explanation ...)

Valery_V - 2021-12-20

Apparently Hunter is somewhat fascinated by Jayk.

Jayk, "A Slow Mutant" has a youthful body and normal intelligence.

It's not such a bad mutation .

Jayk shared with the Hunter intimate details of his past sex life when he was already nullo.

By the way, the Hunter was flustered and confessed to Jayk ...

Perhaps the Hunter, emasculated and hormonally driven by his Suit, was trying to find out how an e-XY like Jayk got off sexually?

The Hunter: "And you were intimate with N, weren’t you, Jayk?" - The Mutant’s mouth fell open, and dumbly he nodded.

Jayk: "He came to my bed a lost little XY, and by morning, he was a fully educated young one... He even found a way to make me feel HIS orgasm..."

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Xyn tries to help Tym recover from exhaustion and depression, and Xyn makes a big decision after learning that Jayk is still alive. This story contains implied castration of minors, implied sex between Adults and said minors, allusions to minors having gay sex, and minors discussing castrations both consensual and non. It is also sci-fi themed.

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Valery_V - 2021-12-22

Tym is trying to help Xyn. It appears that his psionic abilities are superior to those of Xyn. However, Tym has a fragile weak body, and the use of psi abilities depletes Tym's body, who still relied on Xyn to help.

Psionics are able to create a virtual landscape and communicate with someone, inviting him to this mental world of theirs.

Valery_V - 2021-12-22

A little about Rick Abrams and his Facility:

"... There had been three Parts extractions - one kidney, one lung, and one XY emasculation ...

He had handled it all professionally, however, and returned to his office only to find that he had run out of coffee.

The coffee, he mused, had been the worst part of it."

Valery_V - 2021-12-22

I found it somewhat amusing how Rick Abrams reacted when the Hunter introduced Jayk to him.

Valery_V - 2021-12-17

I liked the humorous warning:

"This story contains allusions to sex ..., castration, slavery ... . If any of these things bother you, don't read it!"

The Hunter uses his psionic abilities to briefly bond the minds of Jayk and Xyn. It amazes him how great the love between them is.

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Jayk is returned to his Master, and the Hunter finds that all is not as it seems to be as strange insights and 'voices' begin to intrude upon his Mind. This story contains allusions to sex between fictional little ones and Adults, castration, slavery, and a plot. If any of these things bother you, don't read it!

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Valery_V - 2021-12-24

Interestingly, the Hunter's computer is controlled by voice commands. Jayk and Hunter's lunch scene is humorous.

I love that Hunter is sighed and even flushed during a conversation when Jayk touches on his sexual affairs with the Master and others ...

Very funny when Hunter stroked or scratched Jayk's pointed ear. It can be seen that Jayk is still a cute mutant .

Acer: "But my, my, is he cute! A nice pretty Mutant. I love the ears! Nice teeth. Fatten him up and sell him off!"

Wilson (with tears in his eyes): "I missed him until now... God

s, he looks so weak and fragile like that. Are you sure he’ll recover? ... I’ve been lonely without him, and well, yo

u probably know that I have a LOT invested in him."

The Hunter cares about Jayk's fate when he falls into the hands of Wilson, the rightful owner of the Jayk slave.

By the way, Atreiu immediately liked the character Jaik, who wrote the following in his commentary on the first chapter of this sci-fi saga:

"Atreyu88 - 06.01.2013

A great story. But I sort of wondered if Jayk should have been the protagonist and not just a supporting character."

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Valery_v - 2021-12-25

Master Wilson, Jayk's owner was rich, but he was also lonely. He had purchased Jayk for one reason - sex.

Wilson: "But what should I expect him to feel for me? I bought him, I had him fully gelded. I knew what I was doing, yet I did it. But I gave him a good, safe life with me here. Food, shelter, warmth, entertainment, sex!"

Wilson: "His almond-shaped eyes had almost glowed, and his gleaming fangs had only enhanced his smile when he had pleased his Master. He had been almost tireless in bed, and in daily life as well. He had been energetic, mannerly, always so anxious to please and grateful for his rewards."

Wilson greeted Jayk warmly. True, then almost the only item of Jayk's clothing was "House security collar" - a slave's collar .

The author described the Wilson estate. I don't understand why the Hunter hates flowers ...

Alfred, Wilson's butler, is a difficult enigmatic character. He is very old Approved, so he is almost a complete cyborg.

The hunter was wary of everything that happened in the house Wilson. Something is wrong here, he thought.

Through his Psi, he heard the warning: "Don’t talk to strangers ... don’t talk to ... don’t ..."

Jayk at farewell with the Hunter begged: "Please don’t leave me here!"

At the end of the tenth chapter of the saga, a VERY unexpected exacerbation of the plot occurs. But I don't want to spoil ...