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College Boys (Fictiony by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s14360

A poor, naive college freshman with a rough life of juggling work and school gets picked up by a small, and rather odd, secret fraternity.

There are straight, bi, and gay members. Genital mods abound at the frat house.

Is the faculty aware of this frat, and is it sex for hire to pay for school, housing, and fast cars?

Anything goes for the boys of EUV, and what will our hero do to stay in school?

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Valery_V - 2021-07-23 19:13:23

I like guys Jeremy, Mikey, Miguel, Seo and Larry. They are polite and tactful towards Evan, they accepted him well into their company, they are friendly with each other.

Valery_V - 2021-07-23 19:14:14

Evan is mesmerized by Miguel's chrome cage. He noticed that Jeremy, Undershirts and With - nullo, and Larry - the eunuch.

Valery_V - 2021-07-23 19:19:26

I like the female doctor Doctor Janice Pruitt. She is very professional, respects her patients, treats them with great attention.

Valery_V - 2021-07-23 19:21:21

Me as full eunuch, Evan surprises why he does not want to become nullo-boy. Very successful situation!

Valery_V - 2021-07-23 19:23:14

To my regret, not everyone agrees to be sex toys (even in such comfortable conditions). For example, we learn about the existence of Charlie, and his fate is not enviable ...

Valery_V - 2021-07-23 19:25:06

It's funny the conversation between the guys, the "bottom" and "top" when they discuss their "sex work", how and how they have to pay with the heads of the college, the president, Professor Beamann, her friends and other patrons ...

Valery_V - 2021-07-24 20:16:59

The writer brilliantly managed to describe a medical exam and an orgy.

Valery_V - 2021-07-24 20:22:46

It was pleasant to me how frankly President Landis suggested Evan to cooperate.

Valery_V - 2021-07-24 20:27:16

“Everything is paid for. You get a bachelor's degree, the usual, for just being a member of the group. A Master's or PhD will take some more doing, though?”

“You mean, like Jeremy or Larry?”

Landis nodded. “But that's up to you, Evan. No one is going to tie you down and cut anything off by force."

Valery_V - 2021-07-24 20:28:49

"Castration was sometimes used as a preventative, or a punishment. Now, we just look for volunteers!”

Valery_V - 2021-07-24 20:35:05

It is convenient when nullo small :).

Seo was sitting on Gary's lap, looking very small compared to the trainer, and he was fidgeting. Evan just knew where Gary's cock was, too. Just flip up the back, and POP!

Valery_V - 2021-07-25 22:38:54

The group sex orgy of Evan, Betty and Joe is superbly presented.

Valery_V - 2021-07-25 22:39:32

An eunuch joke. Gary told Jeremy: “Well, why don't you go jerk off in the corner?” (We shall remind, that Jeremy - nullo!)

Valery_V - 2021-07-25 22:40:19

Janice is transgender. “You're looking at the new and improved Jason Thompson-Pruitt!”

Valery_V - 2021-07-25 22:43:08

I love the attraction with Mikey. I would love to experience it myself. (Somewhere I've seen this ...)

Valery_V - 2021-07-25 22:44:38

“The plug gives him a mild shock to the prostate now and again, at random. He can't pee, and the machine will never get tired of fucking him... He loves it,”

Landis assured a shocked Evan,

“The toy in his butt is too small, and it moves too slowly to make him cum again.”

Valery_V - 2021-07-25 22:45:13

“What's a nullo-boy to do?” Landis asked whimsically.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 20:33:00

Sean is a great candidate for a boy group for sex play.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 20:33:35

I love that Evan is worried about his brother Edward.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 20:34:15

The strength of mind in Patrick, who underwent chemotherapy as a child, is amazing.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 20:35:03

I love that the guys decided to help Patrick regardless of whether he becomes their "colleague" or not.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 20:35:55

I do not get tired of admiring the professionalism of the doctor Janice. He can no longer be called a homosexual, he has been a woman for 15 years!

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 20:36:37

Seo seems familiar with footwork, most likely taekwondo.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:03:52

Being a complete eunuch from a young age, I still don't understand Evan why he is not happy that Patrick was castrated.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:04:25

It is difficult to disagree with the arguments of Arthur Landis, which explain why the activities of the gay club are moral and useful from a practical point of view.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:05:25

“And there are two rules,” Jeremy clarified it, “The first is that we don't talk about ??? to outsiders. The next one is that once in ???, you don't leave ???. Violate either, and the patrons, those who support and have sex with us, will deal with you very harshly - and in unsavory ways.”

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:05:59

An example of how someone who breaks these rules is treated is the fate of Charlie, Sammy.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:26:10

I really like Jeremy. He is smart, tactful, realistically evaluates the situation. For example, Miguel's attitude towards Evan.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:29:01

Gary and Evan are talking about Mikey (very meaningful conversation).

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:31:09

"The little eccentric loves torture. He loves when I spanking in training. He knows how to use this ass. "

"That's all he has, sir."

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:34:47

"His choice," Gary nodded, - "a good choice. Glad he landed here when he did it. "

"Do you think he could have hurt himself, sir? If not for The club in which it was reset? "

"Janice told me he hurt himself," - said Gary.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:52:12

Mikey, nullo-boy, absolutely defenseless sexual toy!

Mikey wanted to be nullo and even tried to do it with own hand.

The doctors of the club helped him.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:53:36

Sean's castration, like Patrick's castration, took place in public, but still looked more dramatic, since Sean did not want it, tried to protest ... Even Evan giggled and found it funny.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 21:59:27

Janice explained to Sean: "You castrated boys are much more fun. You only live longer and you do not have these ugly things..."

Funny sounds, but I agree with Janice.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 22:23:56

Of course this is a literary masterpiece. I really want this story to have a continuation.

Valery_V - 2021-07-27 22:46:47

Of course, this is a genre of fiction, events and characters are fictional, but such things actually exist and are very common. At least I have encountered similar phenomena. Many thanks to the writer for his talent and hard work.
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Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am College Boys (Fictiony by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s14360

A poor, naive college freshman with a rough life of juggling work and school gets picked up by a small, and rather odd, secret fraternity.

There are straight, bi, and gay members. Genital mods abound at the frat house.

Is the faculty aware of this frat, and is it sex for hire to pay for school, housing, and fast cars?

Anything goes for the boys of EUV, and what will our hero do to stay in school?

College Boys (Fictiony by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s14360

I like guys Jeremy, Mikey, Miguel, Seo and Larry. They are polite and tactful towards Evan, they accepted him well into their company, they are friendly with each other.

Evan is mesmerized by Miguel's chrome cage. He noticed that Jeremy, Undershirts and With - nullo, and Larry - the eunuch.

I like the female doctor Doctor Janice Pruitt. She is very professional, respects her patients, treats them with great attention.

Me as full eunuch, Evan surprises why he does not want to become nullo-boy. Very successful situation!

To my regret, not everyone agrees to be sex toys (even in such comfortable conditions). For example, we learn about the existence of Charlie, and his fate is not enviable ...

It's funny the conversation between the guys, the "bottom" and "top" when they discuss their "sex work", how and how they have to pay with the heads of the college, the president, Professor Beamann, her friends and other patrons ...

The writer brilliantly managed to describe a medical exam and an orgy.

It was pleasant to me how frankly President Landis suggested Evan to cooperate.

“Everything is paid for. You get a bachelor's degree, the usual, for just being a member of the group. A Master's or PhD will take some more doing, though?


“You mean, like Jeremy or Larry?”

Landis nodded. “
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am But that's up to you, Evan. No one is going to tie you down and cut anything off by force."

"Castration was sometimes used as a preventative, or a punishment. Now, we just look for volunteers!”

It is convenient when nullo small .

Seo was sitting on Gary's lap, looking very small compared to the trainer, and he was fidgeting. Evan just knew where Gary's cock was, too. Just flip up the back, and POP!

The group sex orgy of Evan, Betty and Joe is superbly presented.

An eunuch joke. Gary told Jeremy: “
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am Well, why don't you go jerk off in the corner?” (We shall remind, that Jeremy - nullo!)

Janice is transgender. “
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am You're looking at the new and improved Jason Thompson-Pruitt!”

I love the attraction with Mikey. I would love to experience it myself. (Somewhere I've seen this ...)

“The plug gives him a mild shock to the prostate now and again, at random. He can't pee, and the machine will never get tired of fucking him... He loves it,


Landis assured a shocked Evan,

Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am The toy in his butt is too small, and it moves too slowly to make him cum again.


“What's a nullo-boy to do?” Landis asked whimsically.
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am Sean is a great candidate for a boy group for sex play.

I love that Evan is worried about his brother Edward.

The strength of mind in Patrick, who underwent chemotherapy as a child, is amazing.

I love that the guys decided to help Patrick regardless of whether he becomes their "colleague" or not.

I do not get tired of admiring the professionalism of the doctor Janice. He can no longer be called a homosexual, he has been a woman for 15 years!

Seo seems familiar with footwork, most likely taekwondo.

Being a complete eunuch from a young age, I still don't understand Evan why he is not happy that Patrick was castrated.

It is difficult to disagree with the arguments of Arthur Landis, which explain why the activities of the gay club are moral and useful from a practical point of view.

“And there are two rules,” Jeremy clarified it, “
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am The first is that we don't talk about ??? to outsiders. The next one is that once in ???, you don't leave ???. Violate either, and the patrons, those who support and have sex with us, will deal with you very harshly - and in unsavory ways.”

An example of how someone who breaks these rules is treated is the fate of Charlie, Sammy.

I really like Jeremy. He is smart, tactful, realistically evaluates the situation. For example, Miguel's attitude towards Evan.

Gary and Evan are talking about Mikey (very meaningful conversation).

"The little eccentric loves torture. He loves when I spanking in training. He knows how to use this ass. "

"That's all he has, sir."

"His choice," Gary nodded, - "a good choice. Glad he landed here when he did it. "

"Do you think he could have hurt himself, sir? If not for The club in which it was reset? "

"Janice told me he hurt himself," - said Gary.

Mikey, nullo-boy, absolutely defenseless sexual toy!

Mikey wanted to be nullo and even tried to do it with own hand.

The doctors of the club helped him.

Sean's castration, like Patrick's castration, took place in public, but still looked more dramatic, since Sean did not want it, tried to protest ... Even Evan giggled and found it funny.

Janice explained to Sean: "You castrated boys are much more fun. You only live longer and you do not have these ugly things..."

Funny sounds, but I agree with Janice.

Of course this is a literary masterpiece. I really want this story to have a continuation.

Of course, this is a genre of fiction, events and characters are fictional, but such things actually exist and are very common. At least I have encountered similar phenomena. Many thanks to the writer for his talent and hard work.
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College Boys (Fiction
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s14360

A poor, naive college freshman with a rough life of juggling work and school gets picked up by a small, and rather odd, secret fraternity.

There are straight, bi, and gay members. Genital mods abound at the frat house.

Is the faculty aware of this frat, and is it sex for hire to pay for school, housing, and fast cars?

Anything goes for the boys of EUV, and what will our hero do to stay in school?

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Valery_V - 2021-07-2
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am 7

Of course, this is a genre of fiction, events and characters are fictional, but such things actually exist and are very common. At least I have encountered similar phenomena. Many thanks to the writer for his talent and hard work.

***

And here, as an illustration from life:

New School professor had orgy with students: lawsuit

https://nypost.com/2018/04/06/new-schoo ... ents-suit/

The secret world of orgies

https://www.bupipedream.com/ac/8754/sec ... ld-orgies/
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For Your Own Good (Fiction by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s526

Picture it - you're a boy. You're a criminal. Everyone is DONE with you. The IO Rehab Facility owns you now. Your cell mates are various types of eunuchs. You're not. Yet. The guards are former inmates. There's no way out, you're lost inside the complex. All you have to do is be a good boy ... until you turn 18 and they MIGHT let you out.

... ...
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am ------------------------------------------------------

The first impression is that this is a sanatorium for eunuchs: clean, comfortable, attentive staff :). It's a pity, I'm not the age to be there.

I like the boys Sam, Cheng and Joey, with whom Michael ended up in the same "holiday ward". They greeted Michael in a friendly manner.

Of course, this is a thriller. The tension will build as the shocking circumstances surrounding the methods of influencing adolescents are revealed ...

A funny sketch: "You have a pretty butt," - laughing, said Sam, who had previously undergone a penectomy. Michael was very glad Sam didn't have a dick.

Obviously, Harvey went crazy and bullied the guys, wanted to commit suicide.

This institution provides fantastic means of total surveillance and physical pressure on prisoners up to murder. Sam, with the encouragement of the guard, dealt with Harvey.

Ned and Sam nullify Cheng which wanted to become nullo. I well understand Cheng because I am the same loony :). Michael has a normal psyche, he was shocked by this information about Cheng. Michael frightens the fact that he can be castrated.

Cheng could have been released and given up for adoption. But Sam loved Cheng and tried to persuade him to stay here. I understand why Cheng willingly agreed with this.

Cheng - the gay. He is indifferent to women. And it seems to me that this congenital property of the person.

As a result of the external influence of the ULF transmitters, Mikey suffered a psychotic episode. It is not yet clear why and when this happened, but he has obvious memory gaps.

Ames is clearly involved!

Ned explained, "We did a bit of extra sleep therapy on you. The transceivers in the pillows."

"We thought it would help you to deal with the stress and make you more open to the idea of your castration."

"We've done extensive memory overhaul on Cheng. He truly believes that he doesn't mind being a fully emasculated eunuch. That was one goal. The other was near-total wipeout."

I am very sorry for Cheng. He's a cute gay boy. He did not need to instill a desire to be emasculated. He already agreed to this. They just killed him with ULF exposure!

We learn that Ned has nothing to do with processing teenagers with ULF generators, mercilessly tearing their brains out.

It is a pity that the author did not provide examples of Ned's vocabulary during his shift.

Ned hates the total surveillance system, in particular the mirrored spy globe in the ceiling.

According to the contract, Ned provides "medically service the inmates as required by IO standards". However, he didn't like cutting off the genitalia of young men.

I love that Joey is worried about Mikey.

By the way, it is completely unclear why Joey ended up in a teenage prison.

Michael fell asleep listening to the soundtrack from “1492 – Conquest of Paradise.”

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aCynyt9z8CQ

An interesting and dramatic scene of Sam's preparation for a penectomy. Ames is an outspoken sadist, enjoying Sam's confusion.

I loved the touching scene in which nullo Cheng attracted the virgin Michael.

The fact that Michael had been castrated was generally accepted as a normal procedure.

Sam has joked concerning removed at him penis enlargement: " Oh well, if I DID have it still, you know where it'd be! "

Jason: "I don’t get it, Ned. You just cut his balls off. Big deal. How many boys in there are castrated?"

Jason: "So you wanna save one little faggot?"

The scene of Cheng's death is amazingly described.

I liked that the author described Ned's home computer. As of 2001, Ned has an excellent computer with a CD-RW drive.

The sounds of Toad the Wet Sprocket's "Before You Were Born" from the Fear album played.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRJfR_FFK3o

Ames was being pretty hard on Michael with the punishment when I saw him last. Poor kid. It’s not like he did anything wrong by askin’. All he wanted to do was be alone so he could cry.

Ames couldn’t tolerate a great deal of things, and ‘faggots,’ as he called them, were very near the top of his list.

Ames had beaten Michael that day, after catching him wandering the halls alone. Ames had done something to him to cause the angry red welts on his head, probably electro-shock. And when he had finished with him, he had brought him to ICU and ordered his castration with the rest of his treatment.

Ned was now sure. The bastard had known, and set him up so that he would be exposed to, and eventually, be forced to castrate his own little brother. In some sick way, Ames was taking delight in the fact that he was driving an insurmountable wedge between Ned and the boy whom Ames had already known was his little brother.

Then when Michael had been admitted to IO, the Mainframe had promptly reported that Ned and the new inmate, Michael, were half-brothers.

Ames leaned back in his chair and laughed a humorless laugh at the idea of Ned being the one to castrate his own little brother, a brother that he hadn’t known that he had had until it was too late.

“One should enjoy his work,” Ames theorized aloud. “And he doesn’t. One must learn proper behavior, after all. It’s for their own good, after all. Little heathen bastards.

I admire the work of Linda Johnson. She reports the incident, seeks to obtain reliable information, involving specialists Jason Means and Max Garrison. She eventually awakens a sense of conscience in Lawrence Taft.

Bolton, a guard and ex-inmate, knows that gay boys are often punished and those who have been castrated sometimes die.

Ned is no longer able to hide his concerns about Michael's health from Bolton.

Ames openly lies, speaking to the camera: "I can assure you, and the public, Ms. Johnson, that nothing unsavory is going on inside of IO and what is being done for the unfortunate boys therein is in their best interest and absolutely for their own good."

Linda Johnson interviews Erik Anderson, who is blinded as a result of abuse at IO.

We seem to see the film and in a series of rapidly developing events, I tried to note some characteristic moments, shots.

Taft: "Send fire and police to the residence of the IO parolee from tonight’s news NOW! I believe there’s about to be an attempt on his life."

Taft handed Linda Jones a briefcase.

"What’s this?" she demanded.

"Your Pulitzer Prize, Ms. Johnson," he said flatly.

The documents and records in the briefcase were enough to keep her media crew and Federal Agent Skinner busy for days.

Bolton: "Ames was a prisoner in here from age 15 to 21? We was BOTH on the graduate/career list together! Hell, we was roomies for 4 years at the end!"

Ned glanced at Joey, who rightfully shouldn't even exist if Ames had spent time in IO in his youth.

Ned: "Now, Bolton, why don’t YOU tell ME about Ames and what HE did?"

Abrupt anti-Utopia!

Takes the breath away... Even cried in places...

Huge thanks to you!

You, no doubt, great master of a word.

In order not to break the pace of the story, the author sometimes did not provide details about some of the characters.

This society brutalizes teenagers often punish the innocent. Decisions are made on the basis of personal gain, bypassing existing rules. Justice can triumph only sometimes thanks to the active action of certain good characters.

Bolton promised to tell Ned about Joey's father and the time he spent with him as a prisoner in IO. But we never heard these details. The reader can only guess and assume, but it seems to me unethical to comment here, since the author previously did not consider it necessary to do it himself.

Ames was a prisoner between the ages of 15 and 21.

His father, Dr. Frederick Ames - chief of medical staff at IO said:

"Castration will be for your own good, son...".

The practice of routine castration or penectomy had been his idea.

Thus, it is clear where Ames' cruelty towards everyone stemmed from after he became Mr. Ames, the director of the IO Center.

Those who put Ames in this post paid the price. Lawrence Taft committed suicide when he realized the governor would blame him for everything. Governor Francis Banner was shot by Skinner when Banner reached into his pocket during his arrest (Skinner had a reflex to the detainee's possible resistance).
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For Want of One
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Fri Nov 26, 2021 6:56 pm (Fiction by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s5
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https://eunuchworld.co/s607

*** Bboy: It is the wonderful sci-fi/historical saga ***

https://eunuchworld.co/s609
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am ----------------------------------

Time Paradox theme - an engineer in the future working outside Time finds his existence erased when an ancestor is sold as a slaveboy and gelded.

... ...
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am ----------------------------------

Some modern theoretical physicists admit the possibility of movement of local objects in the time continuum. For example, using the properties of "black holes".

The repeatability and stability of many phenomena suggests that the universe has had many trials and attempts for self-organization and creation of living nature, life. Of course, temporal processes are cyclical, and the so-called "arrow of time" is not always directed in one direction. Thus, for different observers, time flows, as it were, backward?

It is not known at all whether a living person can make time travel. Science fiction writers step into the unknown explore the effects of such travel.

Time Machine - the Temporal Imaging Viewer is by no means compact and consumes an eerie amount of electricity. Human intervention in natural phenomena, as almost always, is very dangerous even for himself! Even observing the events of the past was a disaster for the engineer Kaelen Laws.

Engineer Kaelen was stumped. He practically disappeared from reality, and his existence was preserved in the memory of the computer of the time machine. He cannot leave the observation room, but he can travel through time.

In the fourth chapter, a sci-fi story about a time machine turns into an oriental-style fabulous extravaganza.

Kaelen knows that once in the past, he will certainly change the present, in which the time machine is located and works, with his active actions. However, he has the ability to maintain communication with the computer, thanks to which he will adjust his actions so that changes are minimal and acceptable.

The plot develops very dramatically. Every step Kaelen takes is associated with a mortal risk for him. For example, in the end he may simply be robbed, killed. The computer is not able to help him in such a situation ...

An ingeniously written modern fairy tale, reminiscent of history in the style of the collection "One Thousand and One Nights".

The relationship between Kaelen and Tal, their conversation about the most important things touches me to tears. Paolo is an amazing writer!

The time traveler tries to treat the natives with delicacy, tries not to shock them with his "magical" capabilities. The author clearly shows that the most important "weapon" of the traveler is knowledge and compassion. Tal is imbued with complete confidence in Kaelen, becomes his true friend.

I really liked that Kaelen took care of Tal and even stayed in his time.

The fifth chapter of this fantasy novel has a very mysterious ending (two points - see below).

However, this often happens in this genre of literature. Naturally, the reader is intrigued and longs for the author to continue the story.

Kaelen: "He would change history again, this time in the form of his Great-Nephew - a boy he knew that he would not live long enough to know."

Kaelen's thoughts drifted ahead in time and he spoke the name of the boy that would eventually descend from HIM in this time frame - another boy who would change history - "Bagoas," - he whispered.

This modern science fiction work is eminently cinematic. In my humble opinion, it can only be compared with such a well-known franchise as Stargate, which is already considered a classic of science fiction in cinematography.
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Road to Bayview (Fiction by Unknown &
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Fri Nov 26, 2021 6:56 pm Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s
14574

https://eunuchworld.co/s14578

(The Bayview story continues, as Anon has abandoned it and I've taken it over.)

https://eunuchworld.co/s14726
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am ------------------------------------

A freshly nullified youngster spends the summer in a new town where public nudity is legal, and the neighbors are sort of strange. Some stranger than others, our hero soon finds out.
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am -------------------------------------

Road to Bayview 1:

kwanmingmin - 2016-08-12

It's interesting but things get a bit confusing in the middle.

Paolo - 2016-08-13

I guess I figured it out when I read it the second time. I still find it interesting, though.

artisticlicense - 2016-08-13

I liked it a lot. Can't wait for additional drafts.

Paolo - 2016-08-14

** I should offer that I hope I got the spacing right. Some of it was confusing, hence how kwanmingmin might have gotten lost.

I did have to clear some stuff up. I haven't been yelled at yet (hehe) so I think I must have got it right.**

transmitter (передатчик) - 2016-08-18

Nice idea, nice story. Would like to see another chapters!

ylpb7508 - 2016-08-18

Fun story. Original. Hope there are lots more chanpters.

Paolo - 2016-08-19

There is a 2. I hope there is more, too.

Valery_V - 2021-06-10

Let me be annulled once more for seditious assumptions: Unknown = Paolo
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am -------------------------------------

Road to Bayview 2:

transmitter - 2016-08-21

Hope Garret will eventually start to enjoy his "sexuality". Though I appreciate it is not only sex-story, but also a childhood-story ;) . However, I see question marks? even when I don't expect them :O

artisticlicense - 2016-08-22

Liked this too! Another installment please!

Paolo - 2016-08-22

** I think that's to express to tone of the person saying a statement as a question. Or, were I to end that sentence in a question mark, then my tone of voice would be asking someone.

"I could get castrated."

"I could get castrated?"

Maybe the 'could' should be in italics, then? I don't know; I didn't have any problems with reading them. **

transmitter - 2016-08-24

Paolo: I am not native english speaker, so maybe it is a problem in my knowledge of spoken english. Anyway, I still enjoyed this story!

penectee - 2016-08-26

Love the story! It's been a long time since something of that style appeared here. Write more, please.

Atreyu69 - 2017-06-12

** This story is pure genius.

I love how the writer sets the stage. Recently nullo'ed Garrett is coming to grips with what's been done to him. I can empathize with how he must feel.

Even if he wanted to be castrated and went through a year long process before having the operation it'd still be emotionally wrenching. He's having second thoughts. Well so would I if I were in his shoes! I can se myself in his place.

The set up with Dale, his mom's boyfriend and potential stepdad, is also great. Dale restores classic cars so he both understands the past and he's concerned about appearances.

Therefore he'll be fully aware of just how radical Garrett's change is and will be interested in his new look.

The fact that Dale might just be "interested" in the new eunuch adds to the suspense. Will mom's boy friend take liberties with Garrett and if so how will the little eunuch react? Will he decide that Dale isn't so bad after all?

Peter is a character we've never previously encountered in the EA (at least not so far as I know). He's vulnerable and cries when upset but at the same time he's a fashion trend setter. Just the idea if him in his half mask but "dressing" for dinner by putting on a bow tie is hot.

Sorry to say I didn't care for 16 year old big brother Ethan. Big brother isn't a tease he's a cruel bully who torments Dale over being castrated. This makes no sense.

We are lead to believe that Dale's nullification was a carefully planned event and the final go-ahead was a family decision with every member in agreement.

Surely Ethan would have been made aware that there were boundaries that he couldn't cross and that his mom and Dale would enforce those limits.

The idea of having a year of counseling, classes, psychological evaluation, tests and play dates with same age eunuchs before castration is a great idea.

I don't think anyone, especially not 12 year olds, should rush into being castrated. A year spent to fully understand the challenges of being a eunuch sounds about right to me.

But then we learn that in Bayview, a destination easily reached by car, kids of any age can be nullified as walk-ins no parents required and no questions asked.

Why would any kid wait a full year if hitch-hiking, or a bus ride, would get him to a place where he could be castrated same day and free of charge?

There would probably be good Samaritans cruising the highways leading to Bayview just hoping to give runaway kids a lift to the castration clinic. **

Atreyu69 - 2017-06-13

** I think that in part two too many new characters were introduced to the story. They really aren't needed.

I'd like the story to concentrate on the "relationship" between Garrett and his mom's boyfriend. Is anything going to happen and if so what?

I'd also like to read more about Peter. Is his weird getup just for show or is he actually sort of crazy? **

Valery_V - 2021-06-10

I like rules of carrying out Nullification in this literary Universe.

Valery_V - 2021-06-11

** Atreyu69 writes in the comments:

"We are lead to believe that Dale's nullification was a carefully planned event and the final go-ahead was a family decision with every member in agreement."

Maybe it was necessary to write the following:

"We are lead to believe that Garrett's nullification was a carefully planned event and the final go-ahead was a family decision with every member in agreement." **
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am -------------------------------------

Road to Bayview 3:

Atreyu69 - 2017-07-05

Love it!

Bullgator - 2017-07-06

Amazing

Jaegar94 - 2017-07-06

I really love this series, Paolo. Please know that you have fans, and we appreciate the work you put into your writing.

Bayview has some wonderful character development, and it's lovely joining these queer little boys on their journey.

Paolo - 10.07.2017

Keep in mind, this one was abandoned and I took it over. So it's probably going to go in a different direction.

Thank you.

waka2510 - 2018-10-31

** Brilliant continuation of a brilliant story. I’d love to see more of this.

I’m interested to learn what the rules are for intact boys transitioning to adulthood?

Ethan is described as having to wear a chastity cage or be fined for indecency but adult intact men seem to be free.

What lies in Ethan’s future?**

Ikarus55 - 2019-12-10

Excellent, as always.

Ikarus

Valery_V - 2021-06-10

It is hoped that Ethan will remain intact and pay high taxes (no benefits).

But this is probably a completely different story.

Valery_V - 2021-06-11

** I long thought of why Garrett is dissatisfied. Firstly, he is still quite a boy.

However younger Peter would be happy on the place of Garrett, having become nullo.

I agree with Peter, although I myself became nullo much later...

Could it be that Garrett is not gay after all and therefore does not like the sexual attention of men?

It is very a pity that the author did not want to continue this story yet.**
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Simon and the Holiday from Hell (Fiction by Paolo and C van D)

Simon Scott is feeling the pressures of university, the holiday season, and being responsible for a group of rowdy eunuchs. At least things can't get worse... right?

December, at last – ugh! Grey days, cold winds, smog, sleet...

Simon and company arrive on thier holiday island. Surely it will all be smooth sailing from here on out.

If you believe that, then you are NOT familiar with Simon Scott and his band of rowdy eunuchs.

...
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*** This is brilliant! Paolo has preserved the continuity with the earlier stories and combined this with a scintillating and original plot. A "must".

C van D ***
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"The Card Sharps by Caravaggio". Found in the Internet. A wonderful painting by a great artist: two card cheaters deceive a charming young man. I saw this picture, but did not guess that the young man - the eunuch. And it is obvious. Thanks, Paolo!

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File ... roject.jpg

I am pleased that the author describes Simon Scott as an ordinary person. For some reason, lately superheroes have become very bored with all their extraordinary capabilities ...
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Fri Nov 26, 2021 6:56 pm Wiener Sängerknaben/Vienna
Boys’ Choir (W.A.Mozart "Who honor the creators of the immeasurable universe")

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdaf_ot_Z6Q

Funny scene, grandmother was framed :)

"Didn't you know that Adonis Bluffs was a naturist resort?"

"NO!" We all replied.

“FUCKING GRACE! I'll murder her! ” Gran declared “I thought the parts she cut out were the coupons!”

I like Melanie. She loves eunuchs ...

I really liked the adventures of my favorite characters. Thanks to the authors!

People are saved, evil is punished. Chance's dream of becoming a eunuch has come true. I am glad that the story ends well. Simon's chest stopped hurting!
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Ricky Visits America (Fiction by Paolo and CvanD)

*** Based upon characters created by C van D,

A Simon Scott Spin-off by Paolo from 4 chapters:

https://eunuchworld.co/s10288

https://eunuchworld.co/s10293

https://eunuchworld.co/s10299

https://eunuchworld.co/s10302
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Ricky Silva visits his grandparents in America during summer vacation.

His best friend, Roddy Fisher, accompanies him.

Several surprises await Ricky in America, the least of which is finding out that some old ghosts from past Simon-stories are haunting them...
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am ---------------------------------------

"Oh, DO hurry up, Silva! It's a long swim to the States, you know, and the plane won't wait!"

The boy chiding me is Simon Scott, some years older than me, and one of the most popular students here at Southdown Hall School in Britain. Marvelous school, Southdown. I can't begin to tell you how happy I am to be here, but you can read all about that in "Ricky Goes to School". That would be me, you know - Ricky Silva. I've never done a story like Simon has, and as this is my first time, you'll please forgive me if I ramble or digress? I thought you might...

For those of you who don't know me, though, well, there isn't all that much to tell. I'm an orphan. I'm not actually sure how old I am, either. The fake passport papers state that I'm 14 now; I think I may be younger. I certainly DO look younger... I was born in the United States, I think - at least, my mother registered my birth there.

... ...
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am ---------------------------------------

Valery_V - 2021-0
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It is pleasant to me how Ricky Silva easy keeps the story. More or less everything is clear though I did not read mentioned a story about Simon Scott yet (the author C van D). The hand of the verbal artist of Paola is felt.

I understand nothing in baseball, but, of course I envy those who are keen on this game...

Earlier miracle cure for castration of "Neutersol" was already mentioned. Apparently it is forbidden in the USA.

Some intrigue connected with Dr. Geller which ran away from England.

Valery_V - 2021-06-15

Once I was at their age and at me were still safe... So, if "Neutersol" then fell into my hands, then I certainly used this tool :).

The evil is punished by common efforts. Ricky does not leave relatives and friends.

Thanks to the writer Paolo for happy the end of history!

But I am delighted to professionalism and self-control of Dr. Kristen Geller.

It is undoubtedly legendary personality, deserves respect.

I am a naive person, but it seems to me that she really loved Ricky, of course is very peculiar :).
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In Defence of Eunuchs (Non-
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Fri Nov 26, 2021 6:56 pm Fiction by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s
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Historical account, Byzantine era, from a bishop to his brother who was a cleric and eunuch at the time. Sorta dry reading that I intend to expand on later.

Theophylaktos of Ohrid

The Defence of Eunuchs

*** The author is a bishop who wrote this text in the early 12th century. It was written as a gift for his brother, a eunuch who was a cleric at Hagia Sophia.
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It is a lot of interesting historic facts....

Many thanks!

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Valery_V (imported) wrote: Fri Nov 26, 2021 6:56 pm ____________

Comments on 'The Defence of E
unuchs' (Non-Fiction by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s389

Selections of text from Theophylaktos of Ohrid’s The Defence of Eunuchs with comments of my own on the bits that captured my attention.

The original author is a bishop who wrote this text in the early 12th century. It was written as a gift for his brother, who was a eunuch and a cleric at Hagia Sophia.

One must keep in mind that our eunuch friend is not employed at court, as were very many eunuchs at the time.

One has to wonder, as we read his arguments against the accussations leveled at eunuchs in general, if he is not taking righteous offense at being "put in the same basket" as the court eunuchs?
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Wed Nov 24, 2021 1:19 am ---------------------------------------------

Cainanite - 2013-01-01

Love it!

Uncle Flo - 2014-03-26

A thoughtful examination of a subjrct both current and ancient. It gives me much to think about.

Valery_V - 2020-10-30

Many thanks for explanations of material of the previous article which I read wound, but not everything understood. It is visible that a subject difficult...
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Peace & Quiet [
Valery_V (imported) wrote: Mon Nov 29, 2021 8:26 pm quote="Valery_V (imported)" time=1637913360]
(Fiction by Paolo)

https://eunuchworld.co/s
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https://eunuchworld.co/s3152

A city boy finds some peace and quiet in the country as his father takes him "home" to meet the rest of his family.

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Atreyu88 - 2013-01-06

I love this story. It starts out so real world and normal and from there leads us step by step into the twilight zone of castration.

Valery_V - 2020-10-24

I like this story too...

Atreyu88 - 2013-01-06

I really like the way the boy adjusts to and comes to enjoy being a eunuch.

milkman - 2014-10-08

Well written

Atreyu69 - 2018-05-05

Still one of the all time classics.

Valery_V - 2020-10-24

Romantic gay - it is beautiful...

Valery_V - 2020-10-31

Perfectly written!
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