Hail and Farewell - Part 1

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I just submitted Part 2 of Hail and Farewell. I don't know if many people are into it but it's fun to write and there's not much else to do at 3 AM when I can't sleep. :)
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This is an interesting thesis, and I am eager to see where it goes. But I have one suggestion, Atreyu69. Most of your storys eventually go into bondage and an emphasis of how nullos need to be dominated by intact males. You are evidently into this. But as a M2Eunuch wannabe myself, I am not. I would love to have a series that talks about the relationship of an intact man/boy with a nullo where the two are treated as equals in the match. Your Jeremy has been around for years as a nullo. What has been his experience being a nullo in an historic environment in which there were virtually no eunuchs? He is gay in a time when it was not good to be gay. What are the experiences of a young gay nullo, and how does he come to accept himself as a perpetual (apparently immortal) perpetual boy nullo? How does he deal with the fact that he has to break all emotional attachments every three years? All of these would be good ways for Jeremy's story to develop. But maybe not with Jeremy regarding himself as a slave to intact folks, or into forced spanking, enemas, or other self degradation (in my opinion). Thanks.
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Aklurker (imported) wrote: Wed Apr 28, 2021 1:24 pm Re: Hail and Farewell - Part 2

This is an interesting thesis, and I am eager to see where it goes. But I have one suggestion, Atreyu69. Most of your storys eventually go into bondage and an emphasis of how nullos need to be dominated by intact males. You are evidently into this. But as a M2Eunuch wannabe myself, I am not. I would love to have a series that talks about the relationship of an intact man/boy with a nullo where the two are treated as equals in the match. Your Jeremy has been around for years as a nullo. What has been his experience being a nullo in an historic environment in which there were virtually no eunuchs? He is gay in a time when it was not good to be gay. What are the experiences of a young gay nullo, and how does he come to accept himself as a perpetual (apparently immortal) perpetual boy nullo? How does he deal with the fact that he has to break all emotional attachments every three years? All of these would be good ways for Jeremy's story to develop. But maybe not with Jeremy regarding himself as a slave to intact folks, or into forced spanking, enemas, or other self degradation (in my opinion). Thanks.

Great idea... dust off your writing skills and try it yourself. Be the change you want to see. :)
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kristoff wrote: Wed Apr 21, 2021 6:05 am Look for a photo - especially one made of iron (fe).

My great-great Grandmother had an OLD iron made of iron! Apparently you had to put it in the fireplace and it would get hot, then you had to take it across the clothes or something.....I can't remember. It was really cool! She still used it until she passed away at 103 1/2.
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@Atreyu69, don't leave me hangin' on Part 7 of Tobin's. I'm still waiting on Part 8 to "Road to Wally World". :)
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Losethem (imported) wrote: Wed Apr 28, 2021 4:55 pm Great idea... dust off your writing skills and try it yourself. Be the change you want to see. :)

As my old Creative Writing prof said in the 80's: Write the story you want to read, if you can't find it.
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Aklurker (imported) wrote: Wed Apr 28, 2021 1:24 pm Re: Hail and Farewell - Part 2

This is an interesting thesis, and I am eager to see where it goes. But I have one suggestion, Atreyu69. Most of your storys eventually go into bondage and an emphasis of how nullos need to be dominated by intact males. You are evidently into this. But as a M2Eunuch wannabe myself, I am not. I would love to have a series that talks about the relationship of an intact man/boy with a nullo where the two are treated as equals in the match. Your Jeremy has been around for years as a nullo. What has been his experience being a nullo in an historic environment in which there were virtually no eunuchs? He is gay in a time when it was not good to be gay. What are the experiences of a young gay nullo, and how does he come to accept himself as a perpetual (apparently immortal) perpetual boy nullo? How does he deal with the fact that he has to break all emotional attachments every three years? All of these would be good ways for Jeremy's story to develop. But maybe not with Jeremy regarding himself as a slave to intact folks, or into forced spanking, enemas, or other self degradation (in my opinion). Thanks.

The sir, you argue as the film producer. Would be very great on such "material" created tv show, for example, at MGM studio. Who knows, there can be similar sometime will become possibly?
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Aklurker (imported) wrote: Wed Apr 28, 2021 1:24 pm Re: Hail and Farewell - Part 2

This is an interesting thesis, and I am eager to see where it goes. But I have one suggestion, Atreyu69. Most of your storys eventually go into bondage and an emphasis of how nullos need to be dominated by intact males. You are evidently into this. But as a M2Eunuch wannabe myself, I am not. I would love to have a series that talks about the relationship of an intact man/boy with a nullo where the two are treated as equals in the match. Your Jeremy has been around for years as a nullo. What has been his experience being a nullo in an historic environment in which there were virtually no eunuchs? He is gay in a time when it was not good to be gay. What are the experiences of a young gay nullo, and how does he come to accept himself as a perpetual (apparently immortal) perpetual boy nullo? How does he deal with the fact that he has to break all emotional attachments every three years? All of these would be good ways for Jeremy's story to develop. But maybe not with Jeremy regarding himself as a slave to intact folks, or into forced spanking, enemas, or other self degradation (in my opinion). Thanks.

Hi Aklurker

I just submitted Part 3 and I kept it true to your request. I hope you enjoy it.

Atreyu. 🙏
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Atreyu69 (imported) wrote: Thu Apr 29, 2021 2:47 am Hi Aklurker

I just submitted Part 3 and I kept it true to your request. I hope you enjoy it.

Atreyu. 🙏

The sir, you of course joked: "
Atreyu69 (imported) wrote: Thu Apr 29, 2021 2:47 am and I kept it true to your request. I hope you enjoy it
".

The ordinary reader should not impose the scenario :). The creative spirit of the writer cannot be limited to councils and wishes.
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