Need the Proofreading

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I want someone who could check my story before the post.

I originally Japanese speaker, and not sure my English is understandable enough.

I believe you can send e-mail from my profile page to contact.

I translated a story I wrote by my own.

(If the English version won't work good enough, I will only post JP one.)

I tried to make anyone can read it without Japanese knowledge while I was writing it.

But it have a limit by myself.

I want to know which part of my English is puzzling.

Cuckolded Samurai Warrior

[bisexual][penectomy][cuckold]

Word:4000

[Innocence (imported)]

I got a help, and posted it.

That was a big cooperation.

Thank you!