New Story Idea I'm pondering

[Losethem (imported)]

I lamented earlier there is not much in the way of adult son/father stories in the story archive. So the past couple of hours I've outlined one, and it does not have a title at this point. I'm going to have to edit the outline a bit to get at what I'm wanting to write. Right now I have the story in 11 parts/chapters, and have written character descriptions. I have no chapter summaries at this point, those will be next. But I have chapter titles!

It's an age progression thing, mostly, but the story starts in the "present day" in chapter 1, and will cover 62 years of the dad's life, and 39 years of the son, with the series ending back at the start. The idea is to give you an idea of what's coming, without giving it all away. The true last chapter of this story will be presented as chapter 1, with chapter 11 bringing us full circle. It's a straight story, It's a gay story, but the sexualities are not intertwined. There will be sex, but no adult/underage sex. The only underage sexual activity will be that which teenage boys do during showers which take more time than necessary. All other sexual situations will only be between adults, but no adult child/parent IE no incest in this story.

Can I write something this ambitious? Anyone got a leaf blower to get the dust off my writing skills? Would anyone want to see this?

Chapter titles (yes, Nate and Nick are different people):

Chapter 1 - Please tell us about yourselves - An anonymous interview with the Journal of Gender Non-Conformity

Chapter 2 - Nate, stop being a dirty boy!

Chapter 3 - You need to give Nick, "The talk..."

Chapter 4 - I married Jane

Chapter 5 - Nick becomes a cowboy

Chapter 6 - Amazing Grace

Chapter 7 - You're in the Army, and on your own, now

Chapter 8 - You're my Clara Belle

Chapter 9 - It's the time... of the season... for nutting!

Chapter 10 - Dad, I have something to tell you...

Chapter 11 - Life, as it should be

So... Should I get to writing?

[Friendlyman (imported)]

Dear Losethem,

Definitely you should write. The premise of an intertwining father / son relationship is attractive on so many levels. The exchange of ideas between two men linked by a common heritage, together with intellectual and emotional intimacy is fascinating.

I write many stories (none published here, as yet) which usually involve adopted son / father / brother where the younger man follows his older mentor and allows his body to be transformed to his own and his fathers' desires.

I'd love someone to review one of my stories even though none are completed!

If you want a UK based collaborator please get in touch.

Regards Steve

[smoothandslimboy (imported)]

I never read stories over 2 chapters. Short cliff note versions are usually better since its east to manage, review, edit and revise

[cutnbulls2ox (imported)]

It sounds like a great idea. There is no denying the sexual aspect of males sharing the common DNA in their balls as dads, sons, brothers, uncles, cousins, grandfathers, and other male relatives. Genetics is sexuality. Shared genetics and generations of men relying on their sons to pass on their genetics creates a reproductive and sexual bond between males. Males do have a generational sexual reliance to ensure continuing their genetics into the future generations.

[TopManFL (imported)]

I lamented earlier there is not much in the way of adult son/father stories in the story archive. ...

Chapter titles (yes, Nate and Nick are different people):

Chapter 1 - Please tell us about yourselves - An anonymous interview with the Journal of Gender Non-Conformity

Chapter 2 - Nate, stop being a dirty boy!

Chapter 3 - You need to give Nick, "The talk..."

Chapter 4 - I married Jane

Chapter 5 - Nick becomes a cowboy

Chapter 6 - Amazing Grace

Chapter 7 - You're in the Army, and on your own, now

Chapter 8 - You're my Clara Belle

Chapter 9 - It's the time... of the season... for nutting!

Chapter 10 - Dad, I have something to tell you...

Chapter 11 - Life, as it should be

So... Should I get to writing?

Hey LT,

Yes. For so many reasons.

I think the most important reason is that you are keen on the story. If you have fun writing the story, then that will come across and the reader will have fun reading the story.

I enjoy multiple part stories and find myself looking forward to the next chapter being published.

So, grab your idea, pull that long black keyboard and put it on your lap, stroke each key gently at first, and then as the passion builds, bang hard on the keys that make you the happiest to a climax that will cause the story to eject out of your word processor in spurts that are each chapter.

Have fun writing and please let me know if you need a proofreader - I'll be glad to help. By the way, there is a free version of Grammarly that I have come to rely on and highly recommend.

TMFL

[Paolo]

My advice on writing is still this: Write it because you want to, and it makes you happy. Don't write it in hopes of reviews/ratings, otherwise, you're in for a big disappointment.

[JesusA (imported)]

If the story has any meaning for you, the characters will tell you how long it will be. They will speak to you through the writing process.

[Losethem (imported)]

It will probably go in fits and starts, so it would take a while to get all 11 out. I'm thinking a year+ Obviously I have the basic idea and format down, and what will be covered in each segment.

I've done the one-offs in the distant past (again, it's been 20 years newest one was in 2003). All were written when I was still an owner of a penis and testicles.

Credited to me are:

1. How I became a eunuch slave - written when I still wasn't out about my own sexuality. Bisexual content

2. Eunuch and back again - Story about twin 30 year old brothers who take turns being a eunuch. One carrying the others balls, in addition to his own. Then they swap.

Uncredited:

1. Mike (There are 2 Mike stories - this one is author Unknown) - about a party. This is the story where I said there was a father and son who ended up castrated at the end.

2. UNK House - A college story about a fraternity which has castration as a membership requirement.

So this would be my first series.

And yes, written for me. I have a trusted editor/reader who I've agreed to give to first, as he is the basis for the younger or the two guys. Then the rest of you get to see. I'd guess it will be in the new year before I have chapter 1.

-LT