Restaurant, Aprt II

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Restaurant, Aprt II

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The basic idea of this setting is very erotic, but this story is just too short to be more than an idea. You did a great job with it but it is too short to get into it. And by the way, Sasha is a man's name. I want to hope that you will expand on this theme -- tghe idea of fattening up the calf has tremendous potential. There once was a short story by Charles Beaumont in the Sixties which had this as a theme except all the diners were men who were unknowingly being fattened up to be the specialty of the house --Argentinian beef.
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