Need feedback/spell check

[ka.dick. (imported)]

So I wrote down one of my stupid and short fever dream stories. Typed it down on my phone so it's a mess.

Anyone wants to check it out before publishing? Preferably via PM.

It's a straight penectomy theme.

[Missouri_Steer (imported)]

Type your story into a program that has Spell check and when you are finished Copy and Paste it to EA.

[ka.dick. (imported)]

That's not what I meant, my keyboard has spell checking, so more like grammar checking but either way I just want someone to look at it.

[TopManFL (imported)]

Send it to me and I'll look it over for you.

[ka.dick. (imported)]

Thx. On its way.

[TopManFL (imported)]

Hey @KA.dick,

I sent it back. Look for three PMs.

[Freigeist (imported)]

Yeah i love your stories KA dick! Are there some cute female toes involved too ? Greetings Freigeist

[ka.dick. (imported)]

Yo guys, TopManFL, Freigeist, whoever... So I have a story thing written to a point, and I think it's going well, but I can already tell I either won't finish it or won't be satisfied with it. Anyone wants to take a look, and maybe carry on in case I won't?

It's a side-chapter of the story "Rae" by KA (i.e. myself) - straight/penec/light BDSM.