Requesting feedback for my new story

[Fancyfeller (imported)]

Hi!

Just a general request for some feedback on a story I recently submitted called "The Downfall of Todd Sawyer" (link here: https://eunuchworld.co/s15151). Without wanting to give too much away, 'tis a furry story, and penectomy-focused. :3

Anyway, thanks for reading!

[kwanmingmin (imported)]

I like the peeing part which is humiliating to a dickless boy.

[Fancyfeller (imported)]

Thanks very much! :3 Yep, I wanted to emphasise the lasting humiliation of his inability to pee like a boy any more.

[jman0001 (imported)]

Left you a comment before seeing this thread. If you're interested in discussing story ideas or ever want help with editing, feel free to contact me.

[tempdownload (imported)]

@Fancyfeller any chance you can incorporate a forced glansectomy pleased of a young circumcised guy - where the guy has his glans head slowly and painfully amputated first - before losing his entire cock? Losing the most pleasurable part of a young guy's penis is the ultimate humiliation - especially in front of his guy friends (who will have their circumcised glans heads amputated after)

[TopManFL (imported)]

@Fancyfeller any chance you can incorporate a forced glansectomy pleased of a young circumcised guy - where the guy has his glans head slowly and painfully amputated first - before losing his entire cock? Losing the most pleasurable part of a young guy's penis is the ultimate humiliation - especially in front of his guy friends (who will have their circumcised glans heads amputated after)

Hey @tempdownload,

Great story idea. Maybe @Fancyfeller will write it.

In addition to that, I'd really like to see a story you write with that theme to it. You have a passion for the topic and have the vision for exactly how it will happen. In my experience, that is 80 percent of what it takes to write a story. The other 20 percent is just opening a word processor and putting my fingers on the keyboard.

Remember that after you write the story you have to convert it to one of the listed formatsand attach it to an email. The instructions on how to submit are in the fiction section here:

http://www.eunuchworld.org/story_guidelines.htm

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Submission Guidelines

Send your submissions to eafictionarchive @ treemail (dot) net and put only EA story in the subject line. (or else it can end up in my spam folder.)

Include your story as an attachment to the email.

You can send new stories in .doc (Word format) or .odt (OpenOffice format). You can also submit stories in .txt format. Do not include the story in the body of your email. Use the body of your email for description, username, and tags.

Please keep the stories in 12pt type, and single spaced. DO NOT double space your entries. Do not put spaces above or below your paragraphs. No blank lines between paragraphs.

DO use paragraphs. DO use spell-check.

VERY IMPORTANT! In the body of your email, - Include your username, so we know who to attribute the story to.

- Email Address. Let me know if you want me to include your email address or not. If you do not indicate I will include the email as a default.

- Include a brief description of your story and what it is about. Without this your story will be rejected.

- Choose your story tags:

Gay:

Bi:

Testicles:

Straight:

TG:

Nullification:

General Warning:

Penectomy:

Minor:

Custom Tag 1:

Custom Tag 2:

Custom Tag 3:

Custom Tag 4:

(The "Custom Tag" allows you to write up to 4 tags that are not already offered as options. example: Clitoridectomy ) I reserve the right to reject any story that isn't up to standards. If you include an email address I can respond to, I will try to tell you why I reject it if I do.

Look on the forums for instructions on writing your story. Thread: Story Guidelines - Read before you post anything!

PM me if these instructions are not clear.

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When it says "PM me if these instructions are not clear." It means to Bella and you can send that PM at this link http://forums.eunuch.org/member.php?746-bella

@tempdownload, please do write a story with that theme. The story already exists inside you. All you have to do is let it out.