I really enjoyed this story, which appears to be the only one by its author, Sakebigoe. "My Nuetering" [sic?] gets right to the point without any fluff, bullshit, or padding. The story's 1,200 words are used well to do what needs to be done. There's just enough description of the setting and characters to ground the story and not leave the reader wondering where and when things are taking place and to whom.
While I like the story a lot, the ending doesn't ring true to me. Once the subject's first testicle is removed his reaction doesn't jive with what's been set up. He's surprised and then says well weve already made it this far, may as well not leave it half done. But nothing in the story to that point makes us expect he would actually want to be castrated; it's a brazen joke to him, with perhaps some latent flirting. But previously he'd never gotten into joking with Rebecca about being neutered and didn't indicate he found the idea arousing. That he has a rule against dating coworkers and that he finds Rebecca attractive suggests he has a normal interest in sex (and, presumably, maintaining his ability to have it). So the ending just doesn't quite work for me as written.
I like the situation in the story, where the character starts down a road where little steps lead to his emasculation and I like Rebecca's confidence in handling him. For the ending, I think I would have it where she gives him a muscle relaxant, putting the needle in his arm and giving him another chance then to back out. He declines and is surprised when she actually pushes the plunger and gives him the injection. He starts getting weaker but still declines to back out, wanting her to be the one who chickens out. But she's given him a bit too much of a dose (perhaps he's a somewhat lightly built guy who, when asked, added a few pounds to his weight to sound more muscular) and can eventually only communicate by blinking. He still declines to call a halt to things and she splits his scrotum. Only after she's fished out a testicle and has the cord between the blades of the surgical scissors does he realize she really is going to do it, but by then the drugs have fully kicked in and he's totally paralyzed. Before removing each testicle she gives him a chance to back out, but, panicking and trying to will his eyes to blink, he can't stop her and loses his balls. Just what I would have done. My bias is always for guys who don't want to be cut.
Good, short story, however. If Sakebigoe is still active and has other ideas for stories, further compositions would, I think, be quite welcome.
Review: "My Nuetering" by Sakebigoe
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Re: Review: "My Nuetering" by Sakebigoe
I really enjoyed this story. To me the hero never really showed much fear or reluctance to being castrated. When his female co worker first suggested castrating him, he found it a joke and never acted afraid or insulted by it. And being a vet and a non breeder by choice, he knew the affects of castration for himself and didn t ever discourage or try to stop her routine offers to castrate him. Sounds like they both enjoyed discussing it every time they castrated any animals.
To me the tensions in this story are if he will let her castrate him ? And if she will really do it to him ?
His reaction of volunteering himself to her for his castration disguised in the form of a bet or dare was a way to let her geld him voluntarily and with his full cooperation while pretending he didn t want it. He finally admitted he truly wanted her to castrate him after his first ball was cut off and the pretense that she wouldn t cut him was clearly destroyed. Then, he finally asked her to finish cutting off his last ball because he really wanted her to, not because of the bet or him thinking she would stop gelding him. He openly admitted to her that he wanted her to finish fully castrating him.
Any man not wanting to be castrated was given many chances by her to stop his castration. At each opportunity to stop, he encouraged her to cut his balls off. She basically called off the bet and accomplished the dares after cutting off his first ball. He is the one who wanted her to take his last ball off him and she completely enjoyed doing it too.
He seems like he wasn t against his castration from the start and he increasingly got to liking the idea more as time passed. He finally called her repeated offers and bluffs and he volunteered to let her steer him with his full cooperation and consent. And she loved it.
It reminds me how as boys, we d look for any excuse to dare or bet each other to get naked or risk sticking our dicks and balls into any hole or hazard we could find. All of us eagerly accepted any bets or dares as an excuse to get naked or proudly show off our growing dicks and balls to each other or to other people. The dares and bets were just an excuse to do what we all knew that we all wanted to do for kicks and as a sexual turn on and to show off. Its no surprise that the boys most eager to play these games grew up into the hornier and more eager to show off teens and grown men.
This hero just used the bets and dares to get her to castrate him, like he desired, and he loved being her gelding and seedless stud after she neutered him and then gave him full HRT to make love to her with no pregnancy risks.
I m betting similar kidding, bets, and dares are common among animal vets when they are castrating animals. But you have to wonder how many vets eventually grow to want castration and volunteer their balls to their co workers for cutting.
Among amateur castrators, the desire to be cut seems to grow over time until they volunteer their own balls to get castrated to feel it full force and for themselves.
To me the tensions in this story are if he will let her castrate him ? And if she will really do it to him ?
His reaction of volunteering himself to her for his castration disguised in the form of a bet or dare was a way to let her geld him voluntarily and with his full cooperation while pretending he didn t want it. He finally admitted he truly wanted her to castrate him after his first ball was cut off and the pretense that she wouldn t cut him was clearly destroyed. Then, he finally asked her to finish cutting off his last ball because he really wanted her to, not because of the bet or him thinking she would stop gelding him. He openly admitted to her that he wanted her to finish fully castrating him.
Any man not wanting to be castrated was given many chances by her to stop his castration. At each opportunity to stop, he encouraged her to cut his balls off. She basically called off the bet and accomplished the dares after cutting off his first ball. He is the one who wanted her to take his last ball off him and she completely enjoyed doing it too.
He seems like he wasn t against his castration from the start and he increasingly got to liking the idea more as time passed. He finally called her repeated offers and bluffs and he volunteered to let her steer him with his full cooperation and consent. And she loved it.
It reminds me how as boys, we d look for any excuse to dare or bet each other to get naked or risk sticking our dicks and balls into any hole or hazard we could find. All of us eagerly accepted any bets or dares as an excuse to get naked or proudly show off our growing dicks and balls to each other or to other people. The dares and bets were just an excuse to do what we all knew that we all wanted to do for kicks and as a sexual turn on and to show off. Its no surprise that the boys most eager to play these games grew up into the hornier and more eager to show off teens and grown men.
This hero just used the bets and dares to get her to castrate him, like he desired, and he loved being her gelding and seedless stud after she neutered him and then gave him full HRT to make love to her with no pregnancy risks.
I m betting similar kidding, bets, and dares are common among animal vets when they are castrating animals. But you have to wonder how many vets eventually grow to want castration and volunteer their balls to their co workers for cutting.
Among amateur castrators, the desire to be cut seems to grow over time until they volunteer their own balls to get castrated to feel it full force and for themselves.