To: Author of the Alley Hunter 1

[Paolo]

From Jenny, mail came to archive@eunuch.org , from an older story:

Hi there

I have just read "The Alley Hunter" I thought in the beginning it had the makings of a good story but when it came to the actual act the knife was out the cock and balls were gone no detail that makes a good story it was all missed in my view, but thanks for the story but I believe detail makes the story

Jenny