The Warden's Daughter -- Help!

[DarkkOrbit (imported)]

I finally managed to communicate with the author via e-mail. I suggested he make the castration a dream sequence. That way the story includes a castration scene, but the character can keep his balls for Claudia to torture. The best of both worlds, no?

[Kronos (imported)]

That would be a tough sell considering what Claudia said in the last chapter. But the writer is correct in saying that she loses all interest in the main character without his nuts. If he agrees to all of her demands, the story is over as I've imagined it. She slices them off, sends him back to his cell thinking that she'll take him with her, and the two will never see each other again. Personally, I'd be more interested in seeing what the main char. would do in NY with his balls. He's become addicted to the pain and her palm. The conflict inside his head would be fun to see, which is why I'm happy he went with the man's PoV instead of her's.

[DarkkOrbit (imported)]

Actually, the author thought a dream sequence was a great idea. It hadn't occurred to him before.

I just hope that one day he follows through and finishes the damn story. Either way, I wish him well.

[Kronos (imported)]

Cool. But he just seemed too drained to continue it in his post. Maybe things have changed since then. My fingers are crossed, but I won't lose any sleep over it.

[Mark (imported)]

I agree - The Warden's Daughter is exquisite. Its depiction of pain inflicted is brilliant and very erotic. I would be grateful to read more installments or entirely new stories by the same author.

[Karisma (imported)]

One of the highlights that I remember especially liking in the story was the parts where she has this whole biology/science/medical(ish) way of tormenting him. Having that book or whatever it was and used it as a reference while inserting long needles through various sensitive areas just to see what hurt more. A kind of separation between her and him where she didn't care how much pain he was in(he was just something she had on the 'operating table' at the moment), she was more interested in getting the results and increasing her knowledge.. or somehting like that.

Anyway, I liked that.

[DarkkOrbit (imported)]

Me, too. Her clinical attitude toward her sex-torture victims gives me a hard-on every time I think about it.

I think my favorite line in the whole series is when she says, "Are you scared? ... You should be."

I actually knew a girl like her once. She was a pre-med student. She liked to slice open my scrotum, pull out the testicles, play with them for a while then put them back and stitch me up.

Hmmm ... I should write a story about that girl ...