Gangs, Balls, and Scorpions by Nathan

[Allen (imported)]

Once again, Nathan's writing ability carries the day. If you haven't read this one yet, you must. His characters' personalities are always the motivation for the actions. And while the actions are extreme, they are entirely believeable as being the way the participants would behave. He makes it real inspite of the bizzar way his victim's crotch is distroyed.

Nathan, thanks for once more giving us a hot read.

[jamie6369 (imported)]

I too would like to thank Nathan for this series.

I have read them all and enjoyed each and every one - sorry for not thanking you until now.

Excellent story.

Jamie.

[bella (imported)]

Agreed - I enjoy all Nathan's stories

[Slammr (imported)]

What can I say? Nathan is an artist, and writes the hottest stories on the archive-at least, in my opinion.

[Charlieje (imported)]

Nathan,

I have to apologize: I read this one the day it appeared and loved it, but I am just now getting around to commenting on it.

All your stories are great, but I think I enjoy the Scorpions the best. Those guys are really creative! (or is that destructive?)

Keep 'em coming, Nathan!

[robbehr61 (imported)]

Author Nathan, clearly the master of testicular mayhem, has created a remarkable setup with the Scorpions and their leader, Chris Harriman. His stories of Harriman’s enforcement of gang discipline and honor are all beautifully written and erotically charged, but I think that this one is the best of an excellent lot. This reader began the story with the same misconception as Harriman’s unfortunate prisoner, Talberg - that his punishment will follow the sequence found in the other stories. The author, however, has a an even greater game to play, and our victim lives not only to see his body commandeered for the pleasure of Harriman and the entertainment of his gang, but his vulnerable nads are given over to the possession of a scorpion itself. He is erased as a man, given over to the sustenance and torture of a mindless creature. Through the pacing, the misdirection and then the climax at the end (at least for this reader), not to mention an enviable control of language, the author has given us a terrific ride through his erotic imagination. I’m not usually this wordy, but I really love this story. Thanks Nathan!