May 2018 New Stories

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Here is the first one of the month

In the Eyes of the Lord [G] Atreyu69

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Bella, Thank you for posting In the Eyes of the Lord so quickly. 🤘 I'm gratified to see that it's already garnering a few stars. 😄 The story takes place in the same "Universe" or more accurately the same Magazine (Today's Young Eunuch) as Grand Slam but is a much darker story. 📖 That brings up an intriguingly question. If such a periodical actually existed in real life what would it be like?🤷 I'm guessing that some articles would be targeted for younger readers (8 to 11) and some for older kids (12 to 16). I'm also guessing that some features would be humor,:nutsycuck others serious, :dong: still others would be "boy's" adventure stories ⛵ and some sort of boarder line horror. 🔥 I guess we'll never know.
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Great story, but like all you stories never show the act of nullification. You usually drop it before or start it after. I guess the editor of "Today's Young Eunuch" would never let public something that could upset the readers who are still intact. I hope to read soon at least some advise or suggestions for the parents about what to do with "what remains", with a list of the all option on the table.

I recently read that Hollywood stars bought south Korean foreskins to do beauty mask, may a whole package could interest them more?

http://metro.co.uk/2018/03/15/penis-fac ... g-7388432/

How a kid could react if his dad sell his choped dick for money instead keep it for his 18° birthday?

Moreover, what if a software could predict how a chopped dead pecker would be like as grown man cock like the face of missing kids in cold cases? I always guess how would be my dick without circumcision to be aware about what I lost. I really want to start write a story by my self!
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CircItaly (imported) wrote: Sun May 06, 2018 1:01 am Great story, but like all you stories never show the act of nullification. You usually drop it before or start it after. I guess the editor of "Today's Young Eunuch" would never let public something that could upset the readers who are still intact.

I think that's a good observation. As a boy what intrigued me wasn't so much the medical procedure as the psychological upheaval any "boy" would surely undergo following his castration. Also if TYE existed IRL I think the editors would gloss over the gruesome details in favor of stories about "boys" retaining or reinventing their masculinity post nullification. An intact boy is simply a male. A castrated boy must chose to be male. :)
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There's one last thing I'd like to say about this. I feel that there are a number of writers on EA who do a much better job than I in describing the actual act of castration and nullification. Why should I try to compete in an area where I know others are stronger? 😄
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​Just give it your best shot.
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Just sent you my first story, is an Atreuy's tribute in Italian. Hope google translate will works enough. Feel free to translate it and change it. Please don't indicate my nickname as autor, thanks!

p.s.

check your spam folder, I used a temporaney mail
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two more today .......

Today's Young Eunuch - edizione italiana [G] Anonymous

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Suckers [G] BullGator

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Thank you Bella. It's time to me to return something to this community 😄 If I'll have a positive feedbacks I'll write a second chapter. Google translate works well from english, I don't know from Italian.
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CircItaly (imported) wrote: Mon May 07, 2018 12:04 pm Thank you Bella. It's time to me to return something to this community 😄 If I'll have a positive feedbacks I'll write a second chapter. Google translate works well from english, I don't know from Italian.

Thank you IncestCir.

This is the first time my writing has ever had something good written about it in another language.

Atreyu 🙏
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