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I hope people are enjoying this series. So far it hasn't generated very many comments. Of course it's like that for most stories. 🤷

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I didn't read yet the third part, despite volunteer nullification is not a my kink I really loved the story so far. I won't talk about my self here, but I have to say, your fictions are really helpful for me.

I will read the new chapter this night, I will jerk off, then will be my refractory period, and the day after tomorrow i will tell you what I think about :D
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Part 3 hasn't passed through moderation yet but I found it through a link in another forum post. Very good! It builds on Parts 1 and 2, and I loved the appearance of Billy. Just the sort of character Seth needed to play off of (and with, given where the last paragraph is leading us :D). Seth still seems on the fence about the whole thing, but Billy and Dad are there to give him plenty of encouragement, and Billy's comments about the perks of a 'solo boy' might even give him an 'out' if he wants to use it (though I'm sure most of us are hoping he doesn't).
CircItaly (imported) wrote: Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:32 am I didn't read yet the third part, despite volunteer nullification is not a my kink I really loved the story so far.

Fortunately for this world, everyone's kinks are different, and stories about boys who (even if somewhat reluctantly) agree to losing certain parts of themselves are among my favorites. Even more favorite are stories with boys that actively seek it out. Another story line I like is where cut boys interact - both in and out of bed - with other boys, whether they be cut themselves, or just admirers. This one is checking all of those boxes. I'm also intrigued by the island concept and am anxious to get there and 'experience' it with the boys. It probably won't all be love and cupcakes, but I trust you to find a good balance in what goes on there.

The fathers selling their sons into slavery aspect and the slavery itself aren't particularly things that turn me either on or off. For me they're plot elements, not erotic elements. It will be interesting to see where those parts of the plot go.

I'm guilty of not giving as much encouragement as I should, but I want you to know that I've been reading your stories for quite a while now, and very much enjoy 'Big Brother/Little Brother', 'Road to Wally World' and 'At the Cabin', in particular (not that any of your stuff is bad). New chapters are always welcome! Keep up the good work!
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Readed! I really hope Seth will change his mind about nullification, his dad is little sadistic in this way, offering him Billy's ass!
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CircItaly (imported) wrote: Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:51 pm his dad is little sadistic in this way, offering him Billy's ass!

I got the impression that Billy was more than willing to give up his ass, and that Seth was the only one shocked at the idea 😄
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Indeed: the sadism is against (can I use "against"? Sorry, English isn't my mother tongue) Seth! Why let him enjoy something that he will lose soon?

Anyway I hope Seth will fuck Billy before and after his dad, so he could feel the difference. Feeling his ass much more stretched maybe will make him conscious that he never could compete with his father as top and help him to give up his manhood
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