Apocalypses (by pueros)

[stan (imported)]

This one-off account is simply tremendous. Timely, harrowing and beautifully told, it gives the most convincing argument about the coming war I have read in a long time. A heartfelt thanks to Pueros for this!!

I came here to follow my particular fetishes and sexual interests, but have found much, much more and, to be honest, I never imagined this!!

I find it very moving and hopeful (for us? 'them'?) that this archive is not only a welcoming place for eunuch related issues but increasingly also the home of a community where such eloquent statements can be made.

Please read this account



Stan

[Xan (imported)]

I agree, Pueros is an amazing writer, but this is in a class of it's own. This story has to be read. I hope that many people will.

[JesusA (imported)]

Pueros is certainly one of the finest writers on the Archive, and this one is certainly his very best. It only needs slight rewriting (style, not content) of a couple of paragraphs to be publishable in the mainstream. It is an important story and OUGHT to be submitted where it will be read by tens or hundreds of thousands, rather than the 3 or 4 thousand who are likely to read it here.

A great job on an important topic. Read it NOW!

[Pueros]

Many thanks for everyone’s kind comments about ‘Apocalypses’, including those privately e-mailed to me.

If anyone wishes to place the story elsewhere, either in original or in amended form, as Jesus suggests that it should perhaps be, please feel free to do so. I’m sure that eunuch.org won’t mind, as long as the original source is acknowledged. I’m not personally bothered about author recognition, as I feel the underlying message of the tale is what really matters.

Meanwhile, whilst re-reading my words, I’ve noticed some minor grammatical and arithmetical errors, for which I apologise and which I’ve now corrected, not wishing my sadly all too common proof-reading mistakes to detract from the underlying theme. I’ve asked Paolo if he would kindly substitute this slightly amended version for the original, a task that is, I have been kindly advised, in hand.

PUEROS

[JesusA (imported)]

I’ve reread the story a couple of times. It is a powerful indictment of war and hatred. It NEEDS to be posted widely for maximum effect. Even though it was written for the Archive, there is only a single paragraph that needs to be rewritten for it to be appropriate for a general audience. It’s in the section “Xuan’s Story, part 3” and is the paragraph

Xuan grabbed Jim’s flaccid but substantial cock and brutally pulled it upwards, an action that caused the young American's ball sac to stretch vulnerably. Whilst retaining harsh hold of the doomed penis and ignoring his victim’s vociferously loud entreaties, the NVA officer then started to saw through the exposed base of the 18 year-old’s scrotum.

This is too intense and too detailed. The castration scene is essential for the story, but it needs some reworking before I would post elsewhere.

Maybe Pueros would be willing to re-do it himself so that the entire story is in his own words.

Again, I’d like to send the story to everyone on my mailing list and post it as many places as I can find. It needs to be read by tens of thousands.

Great work!

[Pueros]

Jesus,

I really don't think that I need to do any re-writing for your purpose. If you just eradicate the offending paragraph, I think you'll find that the thread of the story continues nicely.

From my author's perspective, please feel free to do so to post anywhere you want.

PUEROS

[JesusA (imported)]

I sent the story (without the one paragraph) to nearly everyone on my mailing list. I have already received a copy back from someone to whom I had NOT sent it.

This is an important story, cautioning readers against the current madness. Do your part. Send it out to your mailing lists as well!

[Charlieje (imported)]

Based upon the prevous reviews, I felt compelled to take some time off and read this story and its sequel, Retributions. I was not sorry I did so... or should I say I WAS sorry, because the entire thing demonstrates just a little too graphically for comfort the sorry state we as humans are in.

Pueros, please accept my thanks and compliments with the others for writing and posting these excellent narratives (I will not call them stories, they are far above the simple term STORY.

I plan to spread them around as well.

Truly magnificent!

[Unregistered (imported)]

Given what's going on, is this tale prescient (if that's the word) or what??

[Unregistered (imported)]

"Prescient" is definitely the right word for this great piece. Pueros has clearly laid out the horror in which we are immersed. This story deserves the widest possible distribution (and Pueros has agreed to let any of us send it on to friends and family).

I’ve read and reread the story

. It is a powerful indictment of war and hatred. It NEEDS to be posted widely for maximum effect. Even though it was written for the Archive, there is only a single paragraph that needs to be rewritten for it to be appropriate for a general audience.

You can easily sanitize it enough to even send it to your mother. The single paragraph that needs to be removed is in the section "Xuan’s Story, part 3"

and is the paragraph

Xuan grabbed Jim’s flaccid but substantial cock and brutally pulled it upwards, an action that caused the young American's ball sac to stretch vulnerably. Whilst retaining harsh hold of the doomed penis and ignoring his victim’s vociferously loud entreaties, the NVA officer then started to saw through the exposed base of the 18 year-old’s scrotum.

Here is the URL for the printer-ready version of the story:

http://www.eunuch.org/phpSearch/generic ... pocalypses

Click on the URL above, and it will take you to the story. Copy it and paste it into your word processing program. Go in and delete the one paragraph. Clean up the opening part by deleting everything above the second listing of the title and remove the URL pointing to the Eunuch Archive that will be the last line of your new version.

Now you can, and should, send this story to everyone on your mailing list. With these minor modifications, Apocalyses is now an outstanding MAINSTREAM story. Let’s get it out there in circulation!

----Jesus

(Sorry, I forgot to sign in before I wrote this.)