Menopausal Deballing Machine By: flintjelintje

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Menopausal Deballing Machine By: flintjelintje

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Nice little story. Works well. I have a couple of questions:

I'll grant you he should have little to no choice in the timing, but what if she would rather have him intact?

What about divorce and second marriages? Which wife determines his "cut off" date?

Whta about gay couples?

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I just read parts 2 and 3. Same quality of writing. Keep it coming.

My biggest complaint on all 3 is this: No quotation marks! This makes it a little difficult to read because I have to go back and reread a paragraph to know when someone is speaking vs the "first person running commentary" of the rest. You should also consider putting his thoughts in italics.
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Yeah that is a hot story and idea with real world appeal and useful goals. It d stop way old men from wanting 20 year old goldiggers hanging on their necks for cash when they are so old their dinosaur aged balls can only shoot out dust n cobwebs lol. No attraction to legal prostitution if you have no balls or manhood left.

Since us men can only lose each of our treasured balls once in a lifetime and fully emasculate at losing our last ball once, divorces and multiple wives would leave men s balls hanging big until the first female partner s menopause hits. Then it d be at least one nut gone or both gone forever. Men would need to seek younger fertile women to keep their balls.

Since men don t get abrupt menopause like women stop dropping eggs forever at her cut off date, gay men wouldn t get cut unless their partner lost his balls to prostate cancer castrations or injuries. Men just slowly lose their manhood, erections, testosterone, sperm production, and sex drive to old age and pump out less nut output until they die. Nature always slowly castrates all of us men no matter what. Castration only speeds it up some for men.
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Re: Menopausal Deballing Machine By: flintjelintje

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The writer did a great job with this story and his ideas of a menopause cut off trigger and his atm castration machine deballing his man. I loved the way the man eagerly got fixed years before for his wife and still was so eager to get castrated he skipped his 48 hours and last fucks with his wife to get nutted right away n show off to his wife n give her his balls in a jar to surprise her before she knew her menopause was coming. Willing n eager men make the hottest balls for castration stories.

Maybe the author will take your ideas and write more for us fans to enjoy and shoot off on?
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He didn't get his balls back, I would insist on them in a sealed jar. though he did get his scrotum back. One thing I have to ask, Most men surgically castrated like that can't walk afterward. what did I miss that allowed him to do so?
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Sorry, I thought I caught all that in the hour I spent on that series.
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For me the different writing, imperfect word use, and spellling and grammer is just more flavor straight from the story teller, like his accent and his favorite slang as he tells us his story in his own words. Sure it can be a bit tougher to read sometimes, like some guys accent can be to understand. But wrong grammer can add character to a story and personalize it more than perfectly edited writing and perfect grammer used every time on every story. Most face to face talk is full of wrong word use and stories can reflect that real life talk. But editors efforts and improvements to stories are very appreciated too in helping us to read easier, clearer, and to understand the writers tales better.

Yeah the atm deballing machine asks every castrated ex man if he wants to keep his cut off balls or not right after he is cut in this story. The hero David said yes to the machine s question and he kept his deballed nuts preserved after cutting and Dennis was asked but we didn t hear his answer or who kept his removed pair yet.

Thanks for adding parts 2 and 3 author. Hot series n ideas in it. Like the characters and writing style and actions. More please author.
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Yes a display jar is a great idea to show off and best appreciate a cut pair of balls forever and for sure Eunuchorn. I m just guessing maybe the atm deballing machine is so tech advanced that it does such a smooth operation and the men can just walk away all bow legged and cut but still walking like newly cut geldings lol? Its all for fun and hot reading after all. The story gets me hard and does its job real good lol.
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More is coming and I'm trying to work on your suggestions!

Thanks!

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Its us readers who should be thanking you and all of the other generous, brave, and talented authors who entertain all of us as your grateful readers.
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