The Island by Zipper

[ringlo (imported)]

After reading "The Island" I was somehow puzzled and unsatisfied. "That's all?" I thought.

No, it's not all. "The Island (Peter's Story)" gives this story an interesting twist.

Well done, Zipper!

ringlo

[Allen (imported)]

Oh yes, I agree!

I liked the first part, but I also anticipated what would possibly come next. I think Zipper has a great nack for setting the personality of the narrator by the tone used. He presents a fantastic picture of the person through their own words and actions rather than the author telling the reader.

Zipper, super job. I loved it. (More to come in this series?)

Allen

[jab (imported)]

The follow-up story is a layer of complexity and fun that makes it even better.

Nice little twist.