looking for or inspiring stories about the actual act

[neogeo80 (imported)]

I'm looking for stories that give more details about the machines, gadgets, and methods used for the various castrations, penectomies, glansectomies, and nullifications that occur within them. There seem to be so many stories that focus on the fantasy of it, build it up, and then when it comes time to do the act it's just "and they injected it with an anesthetic and clipped it off and sewed it up magically in one step". To me, that's like saying "The guy went to the store, bought the ingredients, cooked the food, and ate dinner". It certainly doesn't tell me anything about the process, and pretty much treats it as an afterthought.

I've read stories here and there that went into phenomenal detail. There was one I remember, where a guy was tied up, had a special clear bubble of a thing clamped on to him, and then an induction cooker slowly roasted his penis and balls until they were done, at which point the women ate them right off of him. The whole thing was remarkably detailed, from the sensations the author described, the smells, how the skin changed from stretchy and white to tight, crisp, and golden brown, it was easy to imagine the whole scenario from start to finish.

Please point me towards stories like that. Stories that go into details about the actual act that takes place.

[Losethem (imported)]

If you find the type of story you're looking for lacking in the story archive, you should probably start writing one yourself. It's one thing to desire, it's another to provide.

--LT

[Atreyu69 (imported)]

I agree that sometimes more detail would make a strong story even stronger. But I'm reluctant to spend too much time on gadgets. Gadget heavy stories always remind me of James Bond's Austin Martin or Speed Racers Mach 5. What's more interesting? An oversexed super spy or his ridiculously tricked out car?

[Paolo]

Continuations of works in progress are pretty interesting...

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[Atreyu69 (imported)]

Continuations of works in progress are pretty interesting...

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I'm writing again and I've submitted Chapter 7 of Big Brother/Little Brother. I hope you enjoy it.